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184 The Hybrid

🕑 Added 2018-12-18 21:25:21 +0000 UTC

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Sanguine_Rayzel

I'm waiting for the notifications to go all DOOM on Dan "the Hybrid is a evil creature viscous and brutal you will be worse rip and tear until it is done.

Monsoon117

He did. I didn't want to halt the chapter's momentum to stuff a status screen in. It's coming in the next chapter though as Daniel get's some downtime.

Rande Knight

No levels gained or after action status from the fight?

Leonard Marchant

I feel like the only (not actually only but whatever) way she should be able to keep up is if Daniel helps out, otherwise it just feels like plot armor or something. Harmful to the suspense of disbelief.

I was just thinking she is due for some upgrades especially with the new skill Daniel got. Share some of that outrageous health regen, even if it's only like one percent it would be a huge amount.

s476

Great chapter, just as always!

Joshua Little

Needs to make a life sharing item for Althea. Thanks for the chapter.

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter

R. D. Schubert

Hey mate! This was amazing :) keep em coming, pretty please!

.TheFear

super intense very well written mate and the direction this takes makes the espen affair bigger by the second which is nice, from tournament to slavecamps to crazy scientists and hybrid monsters.

Connor Alexander

Well that was an interesting chapter! Thanks for making it, and hope you get through your challenge!

Kevin Ramos

Nice

Jess Koch

That was intense. Loved the chapter. I was first.

EitherWay

Noice

Alexander Dupree

Hey I believe that's called writers block. Don't worry you'll figure it out.

Monsoon117

Already fixed.

Alexander Dupree

174?

Monsoon117

I think the reason I haven't been as up to writing as before is because I ended up getting to in my head about my work. When I do that, I over-think a lot of the details, and I end up being paralyzed by indecision. After that, I lose all my confidence and feel like I shouldn't write because it's terrible. It's not the best mentality to have in any regard, so I pushed past it and ended up pretty pleased with how the chapter turned out. Hope you guys enjoy.

Jess Koch

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