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189 Close Call

🕑 Added 2019-01-09 02:31:07 +0000 UTC

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alexander julian

Firstly Althea just. Doesnt get hit. She's range/stealth. But more importantly. She comes back from the dead. If she had Daniels health regen she would basically instantly come back to full every time she revived even despite over time effects like acid that would normally prevent her reviving. She'd be immortal

alexander julian

Schema also provides technology tho. It integrates all tech in all planets it assimilates

alexander julian

Just by the way. Are we ever gonna get to see his dad? That would be a cool meeting. Especially if his Dad had become a badass

@monsoon117 - Your comment doesn't make sense to me tbh. You said he could make killing Althea nearly impossible by regenerating her health bar every second. But he has that health regeneration on himself, along with substantial amounts more damage reduction and actual health. Yet we see him take more damage than his regen can heal on a regular basis. Logically speaking, that damage would also kill Althea, even if he shares all his regen with her. It would actually kill her outright considering she is likely to get 1shot. I'm actually surprised she hasn't considering the kind of damage Daniel can heal from and how much health he has vs her health. And how hard he hits on top of how hard the enemies need to hit to actually dent him.

'Nothing I looked at boded well fro anyone inside.' Should be for not fro - small typo

alexander julian

In terms of the difference in magical and technological medicine it might do to make magic more dumb as a limitation? Ie it just accelerates the healing process. For example if you break a bone the magic will cause the bones to try and mend together again but if there not set in place they just keep going into the spells out of mana? Would be kinda similar to how whenever Daniel gets majorly fucked up he has to realign his limbs to let his health regen work?

alexander julian

Sounds cool

alexander julian

Sounds cool. I like the idea of him using so much mana to keep a team member alive that he himself is melting away.

Shannon Smith

I doubt it. Healing magic would be directed by Schema's system. So a powerful healing spell being directed by Schema would probably be far more accurate at healing what is needed than a faulty biological doctor.

Xwaderman

It might be time for him to make a Rune for his Dexterity as its starting to lagg behind his other stats

Monsoon117

It's an interesting perspective. I think technology has a better healing capacity then magic would. I'll have to make a plan for it though.

Pixelblade

Amazing chapter. I do wonder about healing magic. I don't think we've truly really seen any yet in the story and the doctors seemed to be relying solely upon technology to heal Caprika. Edit: except for Helios lol (I seem to have the memory of a goldfish)

Monsoon117

He can technically, but the user loses their minds when it happens. It's like this, if you have a mana pool of 1,000, that's the extent of the power of your mind. You can exert yourself until that pool is emptied. Now imagine if someone like Daniel came long and shot 1 million mana into your body. Imagine a willpower with 1,000X your own mind's potential occupying your mind. Once the mana was gone you'd feel like an entirely different person, like you were a part of a hive mind. I'll have to think about it some.

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter

Joshua Little

I get it but only because he is broken and I would expect it to be more an enchanted item. Doesn't he already have a magic version that siphons Althea's mana to hold back her eldritch nature. Besides reality altering is what his runes are about.

Monsoon117

Inefficient conversion and hefty limitations will be necessary. Something like intricate medical knowledge of the specific person involves or something like that.

Leonard Marchant

I feel like that's a bit too op. Like, he's crazy powerful now but idk.. maybe if it was done right? I can't imagine it though.

Monsoon117

It will be.

Monsoon117

I added a sentence or two on chapter 186. It's while their searching Mt. Ash.

Monsoon117

I could imagine healing magic, but actually transferring health regen would be too broken imo. He could heal Althea's entire health bar every second, making killing her nearly impossible. Same with everyone else on his team.

Gardor

Which chapter explains the week of radio silence while they were in a trance? Cuz my first thought at the message saying "another bomb" was "holy shit did you add a paragraph about them getting bombed to explain away the lack of communication?" Then I remembered the bomb at Daniels house.

Joshua Little

I'm genuinely surprised he hasn't made a spell that lets him share his regen so he can heal others. Thanks for the chapter.

Daniel

Delilah and now Caprika, this could make good motivation for him to look into healing magic? His insane regen, coupled with those he knows?

Monsoon117

Thanks and fixed.

Monsoon117

Bounties and classes are separate things. Imagine if Yawm collected all the bounties from following Etorhma and collecting the runes before finishing his Breaker class. He'd be able to avoid the punishment for his crimes by managing the loophole. In general though, a classer is given a quest that allows them to eliminate their bounty with some relative ease. For example, taking out an illegal organization shouldn't be all that difficult for Daniel or Althea, especially if they do it as a group. That being said, this is definitely something that should be clarified in the actual book through a convo. I'll make sure to put that into the next chapter. I already have a conversation planned, so putting in a line or two of dialogue shouldn't be too difficult.

Zed

Where 》were?

Synben28

When Helios says that Althea is unknown, is he referring to her unknown status? Because to me it doesn't really make sense for her to still have that. Those with classes like Speaker, Breaker, and Fringe Walker effectively work for Schema, so shouldn't any unknown status be removed upon acquiring the class? Otherwise people would just be hunting down the very people Schema is trying to get to do important jobs in combating the Eldritch, interfering with their ability to perform the roles Schema wants them to.

Monsoon117

It feels like you set up a bot to instantly make a comment after I post. It's just that unbelievably fast.

Monsoon117

I missed 15 minutes of writing two days ago, but other than that I've been on schedule since January 3rd. Around the 21st I'll really be pumping out content. That's when I'll implement the fail safes I mentioned before to retain longevity despite the larger than normal workload. Wish me luck. Also, if you find something strange about the chapter, don't hesitate to point it out. I'm always trying to keep the quality crisp, so feedback is appreciated.

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