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198 Preparing for Battle

🕑 Added 2019-02-07 01:15:13 +0000 UTC

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Ljsquared

"we've yet to access the threat..." I think you mean assess here

alexander julian

That would be awesome. A real boon to earth's defences and starting to make it relavent in the galaxy. Keeping to a tradition of having immigrating allied aliens come to earth that aren't just taking advantage of them would help them grow a bunch. Also stuff like giaglethen/human/elrari teams could be cool given giaglethens are used to humanoids who are more subservient and weak (espens). I just really like the image. Also giaglethens in schema would be mad powerful. Like changing the rude against the eldritch powerful

John Thomas

"The effects are limited to just armor as well" -> Are not limited??

Monsoon117

Anything is possible with the cipher, though it comes with risks.

Monsoon117

Ok, I can add those. If you guys want it, it's not too much trouble, and I don't want to make the chapter too long.

Monsoon117

I could have stretched this out to quite a bit more in length. I don't know if people would consider it filler though. It's necessary to add stability to the events, but 'showing' all the events in this chapter would take a lot of added writing that I don't know if it would end up being meaningful in the long run.

Alex R

If you get a class, are you able to later upgrade it to something else. Like Speaker -> Seeker

Leonard Marchant

This felt quite rushed, like, more so and you'd just be writing in bullet points or something. Like I want to say maybe you sacrificed wordcraft for the sake of plot progression? Idk.. I did enjoy the metallurgy though, some nice depth to that.

Kemizle

I hope every one Agree that earth should be legions home world...all of it not just a part

Pretentious Slime

A good turn of events for them. Even better since most gialgathens are rather big, tanky, and naturally older therefor of higher level. Then there is the potential of becoming skyburners, or ethically better variants. Despite the sharp increase in strength if added to The harbingers legion, there is still the problem of mana pollution that would be bad carrying over to earth. Then you also need to consider how adding those creatures to his army will only really be a drop in a very large bucket compared to say large faction army’s and other great military forces. Finally, do to this, it might be equally as great for Danial to just make deep connections with other powerful people such as the slime princess lady... or even the astral cult beings.

Alexander Dupree

I know you spent a lot of time on this chapter but if you split it into three instead of two and make the first chapter a construction chapter, I think it would be better. Right now a lot of the construction is just glazed over. Like where does he get the gems is just "people on earth." That's not terrible but it's kinda boring seeing as gems are a new magic feature we haven't seen.

drag0nreb0rn

It would be great to see the Gialgathens join Schema. Maybe become the leaders of Daniels Guild on this planet!!!!

Pretentious Slime

Group of lvl 100 speed runners getting ready to fight the level 1000 raid boss.

Atlas Dwarf

Thanks for the chapter. Well if Chroma and Krog survive this we might just see the first gialgathens join Schema's system. Flooding his guild with them would also be ideal.

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Omega

Thanks for the chapter. She thinned out a few of the more scrupulous members. This might work better as unscrupulous, or zealous

Manamaw

Any chance we could get the descriptions of the items in the future? The item descriptions are always interesting since they aren't described very often

Monsoon117

Good catch. Fixed.

Grayson

Shouldn't his teamwork skill start at level 5?

striderfighter

We haven't even access the threat

Monsoon117

Massive chapter here. around 6,000 words. It was a lot of fun to write though, and hopefully you guys enjoyed the crafting elements. I always enjoy writing those out. I should be able to get another chapter out tomorrow since I have a bit over 2,000 words left of the chapter after splitting it up. I think this will work better given the tone of the infiltration. I want it to feel up close and personal, something this chapter wasn't about for the most part. Either way, hope you guys enjoy as always.

racktrack

Second

Jess Koch

First I’m back


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