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200 The Fallen

🕑 Added 2019-02-19 22:11:27 +0000 UTC

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Shannon Smith

How? She was infected by those nasty worms that eat and replace the body however long ago Lehesion beat her in a fight. There can't possibly still be a mind, because the worms would have eaten it long ago.

Monsoon117

IT's possible, though Althea's sheer strength is outpacing her durability to an extent where she's going to need some kind of reinforcement soon. Otherwise she'll break her bones with normal attacks.

Alex R

Can Althea throw Daniel like Colossus does Wolverine in X-Men 3? Granted Daniel can launch himself faster than Althea can throw him but is it possible?

Demonuss

Well this should be a wake up call for the frog dragons, that even one of the greatest among them has become nothing more then fodder for insane experiments conducted by those loathsome dirtwalkers they look down on so much. Goes to show that in the big wide galaxy the cocktail of hubris and laziness will only lead to devastation for their race.

Monsoon117

I have an outline, though it isn't incredibly detailed. It's like going on a road trip. I know where I want to end up, but I'm fine with stopping along a few interesting places along the way. Hope that helps.

Stephen Emrick

I meant "was" instead of "us" and "Hatters" instead of "haters". Damn auto correct!

Stephen Emrick

Wait, Emagrotha us the dragon people god right? How? Wh-why would someone turn them into a monstrosity? I mean... Heck, that's just a waste of good materials. If Emagrotha was dead before this then at least it ressurected him but still! These researchers are mad as haters!

Alex R

Do you have an outline for where you want the series to go or is it more whatever fluid?

Monsoon117

I hope it isn't too much. I can go overboard with the gloom and doom if I don't check myself sometimes.

Monsoon117

This made my day.

Grevis165

Holy smokes. The cliff is huge!! Next chapter hype :D

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapter

Atlas Dwarf

It seems the eldrich weren't able to consume Emagrotha completely. That being said the fact the researchers were keeping her alive and the stash of gialgathen relics makes me think the gialgathen's and other Giess animals might already contain eldrich ancestry/magic. This could also explain their focus on using espens for the hybrids. Also with the cipher now involved, there's a good chance Lehesion traded his followers manpower for knowledge of it. This aligns with his goal of getting the eldrich to consume the espens (and the rest of the worlds inhabitants), considering all of them are using 'his' mana source which he needs for the cipher.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter. Would bee cool if they could save Emagrotha.

Louisthau

You see that's the problem with this story : there isn't more of it.

Some BS Deity

Yep, the universe is a terrible place. Let's hope Daniel makes it slightly better next chapter.

Vin Reisling

So we have a undying Emagartoha being endless devoured by the Hybrid. That's messed up.

Monsoon117

Several others have mentioned this. I'll change that interaction a bit.

s476

Also freaking good chapter, although I hope the next chapter comes quickly, as the tension is palpable.

Manamaw

It seems out of place to argue about Daniels rune making there, almost like they being influenced like lokis scepter in the avengers. Mabye it's something in the facility affecting them. Also it feels like they have talked about that exact thing before in regards to todds peculiarness and Althea did not have much to say about then.

REPOsPuNKy

Oh boy, you really do like your cliffhangers don't you? Now I'm going to be antsy and jittery till the next one comes out damn it.

Kevin Ramos

Nice

s476

I didn't check with any expectations..man I am happy, love reading before bed. Thanks for the chapter!

Jacob Santos

Fuck yeah!

Monsoon117

This chapter was actually a lot of fun to write. I always like more psychological elements in my stories, so being able to expound a bit upon a few ideas I've had is always fun. Just as well, I hope the build up and what not was exciting. This is where the story will really start picking up pace and a few revelations of what's going on will pop up, answering a few questions you've had for a while.

Alex R

First?


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