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🕑 Added 2022-02-14 21:24:17 +0000 UTC

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Osiris

Oh god. It's an mkay :D

Gardor

"her angel wings locked behind her" Like she held her wings rigidly behind her back, or they were in manacles? Also, somewhere in there you say "emaciated out", and that's an incorrect use of emaciated I believe

Rubeno

It's satisfying option yet also one that is flawed. Everybody can use bigger fist. Not all people can wisely dissolve situation by defeating opponent in their own game just like Daniel did in this chapter. He didn't directly attacked the winged girl but instead he broke her talking game and asserted himself as superior even without violence. Now that is something awesome!

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

Rubeno

Well the line about Daniel underestimating himself in cipher knowledge in comparison to Baldag did create impression that Mc armor becoming dimension and subsequent opness was planned. Yet I have began reading the story after rewrite and Baldag never mentioned anything about creating dimension. Only eldritch skin. In other words I guess Mc armor is product of Baldag and Albert rather than a design. The only thing that can be said is sketchy is how despite having access to cipher both schema or lich never tried to reproduce Mc armor. Hey monsoon,, this may be good plotline in the future where schema in the secret tries to reproduce Mc feat with... Dubious effectiveness.

Monsoon117

This lottery is a great way to showcase some other anomalies, but running into them at random wouldn't have made sense. Shalahora and Valgus are both anomalies for instance, Daniel simply hasn't seen what they're capable of yet.

Rubeno

Yeah it was explained why anomaly like Daniel was allowed to exist, his armor hunger for eldritch. Yet it was stated few times thst there are hidden dangers in the cosmos greater even than schema not specified that they are old ones. It was never said that Schema is only overlord of this cosmos. Even then there should be units who are anomalousoy powerful in their own regards somewhere. Either as a slaves of schema or outside of known space.

Monsoon117

Thanks and fixed.

Monsoon117

Ok, so I'm gathering he's lacking depth in his motivations. That should clear up soon, and it will make more sense why he's allied with Daniel and the like with time.

Monsoon117

^ This. In the rewritten version of the New World's beggining, I made this much clearer.

Monsoon117

Easy fix for clarity. Thanks and done.

Radangus

by ulterior motives i mean he has no real ‘purpose’ except making allies and oh he coincidentally met daniel before going into the meeting and liked him

FlawlessMovement

Just start the furnaces up and start producing TRILLIONS of mana and just…..break their spirits with such an overwhelming entity being near them lol don’t actually hurt them just IMPLY violence on a massive scale

David Hedges

The vast majority of his groundbreaking ability stems from multidimensional-ness. As shown earlier in the story, other groundbreaking people are indirectly killed by Schema using bounties either for knowing the cipher or having non-standard biology. Daniel was just extremely lucky.

Rubeno

One thing I don't like about the novel is how ONLY Mc is groundbreaking entity. Considering since of the cosmos you would think that there would be also other anomalies maybe also those living longer than Mc capable of matching him at the same level of power not only normal mortals depended on limited system for power.

Rubeno

I don't like your usage of "ulterior motives" expression in this context. It makes me think that you perceive politicians only as convincing, evil schemers. Proper expression would be to describe shalahora as being not well spoken and charismatic. Monsoon truthfully already did excellent job at portraying how excellent politician should look like in form of Florence and Yawm. Even with some scheme targeted at Mc you can't help but to appreciate them (even if Florence is good bro)

Christian Nweneka

Please change the "I'd of"s to 'I'd have' or 'I'd've' Bad idea trying to trap Daniel, veerryy bad idea. At the very least, he's survived this long and is hanging around with someone super high level, should let them know that this course of action is unwise

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Zachary Smith

Ooooh my god that’s so good I’m so ready to see what happens

Rubeno

Baldag created eldritch skin. An armor. Carapace that evolved into living multiverse. It's kinda as if golem Mc created evolved into something more.

Matthew T

True, he is a dimension. But Baldag Rhul knew enough to create not only a whole new dimension, he created a sentient multiverse

Drew

they are gonna get recked thank god danial knows what he is worth now. i hope he gets some furnaces as reparations after he strings them along

Drew

ya right after he got good at leaving his shell lol

Conor McGroarty

Daniel cannot be restrained unless you take his dimensional wake (himself) into account. He can just ditch his epicenter and form a new body. Daniel may enjoy playing along for a minute or two though

Oluwadarasimi Ogunshote

This is gonna be fun. Heads are gonna roll or atleast get beat on until they cry uncle.

Tatsu

Soooo ulterior motives are a must for high lvl sovereigns? Shalahora only ever was a fringe walker and no politician by any means. He is mostly simple and straightforward and it completely fits his lifestyle of being out alone in overwhelmed worlds culling horrors. There is no need for convoluted plans, false talk or hidden motives and with his overwhelming power that he gained in isolation he has no reason to be afraid of hidden motives either. As such he is very much in character, especially when he allies with daniel who thinks alike.

LootGoblin21

This seems like a really stupid thing to do and I can't wait for the fallout from it. Next chapter please!!!!

panfam

Karens reach stretches farther than schemas.

Reyhulko

Hilarous! They want to restrict him phisically?

Weebking12

Lol if they want to fight Mc they can try lol it's not like he has a army or anything

Radangus

with no ulterior motives (thought surface level thought reading to understand how to interact is a good explanation for that)

Alex R

"I might know what [that] he's up to." -> Delete [that] killing the stragglers [on] mass. -> [En] he'd [of] gotten one if he faced the survivor's faction. -> [Have] for his [lotteries rankings] or a good fight. -> [lottery ranking] [Where] they this combative before? -> [Were]

kyle

God damn cliff hanger 🤣

Radangus

again, its jarring to see the highest level sovereign be completely perfect and like daniel

Trenton Rekdahl

Just a thought, but if Daniel intentionally provokes the gamma blasts from below by messing with the bones enough, then he could develop a whole new suicide tactic against the enemy faction. It may be useless against Valgus, but the primevals and other rulers would surely suffer from it.

Rubeno

Interesting comment of Daniel about Baldag ruhls cipheric ability. He really sells himself short by saying he will never match Baldag in runes. Why? It's simple. He is dimension. Cipher is called dimensional cipher for a reason ;D besides even if Mc armor is miracle cosmos is too big for other miracles not to exist also created by cipher genius or otherwise. In fsct in the future it may be good idea to introduce other anomalies in different ways than Mc.

s476

Thansk for the chapter. Something I would like to note: I think its more fluent to put the rhuls name in with the remark to bloodHollow Instead of "him" as that might also refer to shalahora. Might be just me though

Radangus

its been out two minues… how!!!

the void

Thank you for the chapters!

Monsoon117

This chapter was a fun write, but a lot's going on with my life atm. I'm squeezing in all the writing time I can and not cutting corners, but that's why this chapter required an extra day. Anyways, enjoy guys.


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