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🕑 Added 2022-02-15 17:41:11 +0000 UTC

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Gardor

Iona wasn't the one who invited him in, which he should have remembered, as that second gruff voice was an obvious point he should be curious about

FlawlessMovement

So important question. Do you think Daniel could build a world, I know not instantly but with all the current furnaces and like a year of effort do you think he could?

Mastermazer

My favorite part of this chapter surprisingly wasn't Daniel showing off, but the short bit about him being disappointed in the other rulers for falling for basic manipulation. It shows that just because he's stepped into a new tier (being a ruler), it doesn't mean he's back to the bottom of the food chain. It's a subtle way of validating all the progress he's made, not just in power but also as a person.

Monsoon117

Editing error right there. Fixed.

Rubeno

Florence is user of the charisma build both in stats and his natural charismatic disposition and he uses it in a way that most would consider for "good of the people". Why would charisma builds be forbridden?

Sani H

That was badass

David McConnell

Epiiiic!!

Abdo Fadel

Good chapter thank you

Weebking12

XD

Conor McGroarty

Quite short but no less enjoyable

Zachary Smith

Thank you!

Zachary Smith

Holy shit holy shit holy shit excited to read!

Edu Thomaz

We both are, because this chapter really felt very satisfying indeed

Weebking12

Oh how that makes me so satisfied (I'm extremely Petty by the way)

Potation

This chapter is mmkay :P

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Wanderingwolf

It was short, but he got the point across that he wouldn’t be bullied. Especially by someone that was using nothing but charismatic manipulation. Her choices could bring the downfall of her and other rulers.

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

Kristopher Abraham

I remember there was talk of a huge charisma nerf in the past. I'm guessing once Daniel is able to alter Schema, he'll be smashing charisma again as it is so annoying to deal with such builds. Or once he develops his own system, then I am curious if he will allow such builds.

Monsoon117

And if she spent that kind of time and effort to build up the situation, her position would be much firmer. However, she's trying to restrain Daniel within the confines of a conversation, something he won't allow. That's my idea of the situation, anyway.

Rubeno

Well kinda yes xanxia tends to agree but also huge no. Mc in this chapter refer directly to the winged girl surety of her position without good information about Daniel and forgetting virtue of personal power in xanxia like world yet... Charismata driven builds can't be underestimated. There are different kinds of power. If she for example created alliance of several rulers against earth and used various means and schemes and Daniel would be fucked despite his Gigantic rn power.

Jachin Nelson

The only Law that truly matters is the first Law. The Law of the Fist

Jachin Nelson

That was mine

Rubeno

Mc in this chapter pretty much says despite epic words that in world of schema personal power is a king in comparison to being politician. Is my understanding correct?

Rubeno

Damn I love MC penchant for epic speeches. They always make my blood boil.

Hayden Pech

Oh hahahaha this is great.

Pranav

Get R E K T

Titaniumtac

Great chapter

Alex R

both an insult and a []. I kept that to myself as I frowned, -> A what?

the void

Thank you for the chapter

GunsOfPurgatory

This was a really great chapter, and I think the length doesn't matter since it accomplished what it needed to do

Rubeno

I'm glad you are having writing as much as we have reading it ;)

Monsoon117

I'm not sure, but this is likely the shortest single chapter posted for The New World ever. While writing it, everything came together really well, and it felt like I was trying to force the chapter to be longer. While I don't ever intend to make these kinds of chapters the norm, the reason I even make chapter's long in the first place is for the immersion and satisfaction element. I want each chapter to be a dive into something and to have some resolution. While the brevity of this one prevents crazy depth, I think this chapter stands alone quite well. It feels complete, so to speak. That combined with the quick posting time made this one not so bad. Now, before this comment becomes longer than the chapter, enjoy guys. I'm heading off to start the next one. Writings been a lot of fun lately, and I'm really trying to just cherish this and have humility.

GraveLurker

Shorter chapter, but fucking flawless!!


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