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🕑 Added 2022-03-24 19:14:27 +0000 UTC

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Asurathe13th

@Monsoon117, its your story, I'd just say keep in mind that Daniel is damn near our very definition of a god. And arguably (and I'm not the only one who shares this opinion) the most powerful and well rounded humanoid mc in the genre (kudos to you). He deserves a good flex. And these guys really should acknowledge his might, with respect, awe and a little fear.

Monsoon117

I coud've bitten off more than I can chew, but I'll try to pull this together.

Pretentious Slime

Not every big name can be a big shot. Remember the universe is incredible dangerous, we pretty much saw the worst of it with Daniel and Yawm. But he was thrown into the deep end by schema. It’s like hyper Darwinism tbh. Even the system rewords people who adapt right? Well not everyone can and it shows. So then you have fringe minority of true monsters like Daniel and his colleagues (even they are emboldened by his power though) that and it seems schema doesn’t benefit from retaining people that are TOO powerful.

Joey McGowan

Feels weird how all these super powerful rulers are incompetent saps who need their hand held to wipe their own ass. It makes a little bit more sense that most of them are politicians or business owners who inherited planets, but still...

Asurathe13th

Okay, I'm a little loss. Why is Daniel building this settlement again? And why is he even engaging or entertaining anyone who cant further his goals? Which is over 80% of the "rulers" here. And as a commentator stated above, the tone shifts are a bit, disjointed. He's gone from building cities, creating life, fighting nearly non stop with beings that could rip the Earth apart, ( which is awesome)to what seems to me, teenage anks dialogue and reactions. In a atmosphere that reminds me of high school politics. Am I missing something?

Monsoon117

I did, thanks and fixed.

Monsoon117

Daniel wants his wiring expertise for himself, so that should be better elaborated. As for the buddy-buddy situation, no one's spoken to Shalahora for that reasons. Daniel isn't the person who handled it, and the people below weren't involved either. I could be wrong of course, but that's my reasoning. Maybe addressing the issue could also solve it. EG, having the worker rulers mention how they're terrified of Shalahora. People give him a wide birth, etc.

Monsoon117

I'm very fortunate that none of my family has passed, but for her family, it's like they're living in some war or invasion. So many people have passed that it's mind boggling.

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

Gardor

Yeah I don't remember them becoming buddies, so it seemed odd for him to care about his crush. Much less take time out of his rebuilding project to go have a chat with him.

Kryn

Woohooo, thanks for the up date!

Cormir

@Monsoon "but the director above would take care of finding and hunting people down anyone who did so." -> "but the director above would take care of finding and hunting down anyone who did so." I think you have an extra word here.

Username

It's been a while since i read the last couple of chapters, so I may be wrong. It seems to me that the charecters are all over the place, one chapter they are torturing a ruler over a slight, and a couple of in univers hours later Daniel is giving akward dating advice to a stranger.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Connor Alexander

No matter the bitching we have over chapters, family comes first man. Hope you and your wife are ok and recovering. This COVID situation is wild.

Alex R

That's why I'm saying I hoped he did fuck up. Because he thinks she is trying to sabotage him but he did actually mess up

Anon_Anon

I think the implication was that Iona might have intentionally, either through sabotage or negligence, caused the issue. Which is why Daniel was narrowing his eyes.

Weebking12

Family comes first man your doing good

Hayden Pech

“Lastly, the cores spawned a shield spawned over their station” “Lastly, the cores spawned a shield over their station”

Alex R

I'm hoping that Daniel did fuck up and it isnt just Iona trying to make him not look as amazing as he has been. The rapid depressurization causing issues does make a lot of sense.

GunsOfPurgatory

Family comes first man! We understand, dw

CW_Alpha_CW CW_Omega_CW

Keep up the great work! Family always comes before work, no matter what.

Monsoon117

It's been a rough last month. My wife's family has lost five people to Covid in the last year, and two of the deaths and funerals were in the last two months. I've been helping where I can, and it's been time-consuming. I should be able to put more time into my work now that the storm has passed. Sorry for the holdup.

alu360

Thank you for the chapter monsoon!


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