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354 Madness

🕑 Added 2022-06-07 22:23:39 +0000 UTC

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Alex R

I may join you [know] -> now

Kevin M

No I think the Old One made him into more of a ticking TimeBomb. Feels like he didn’t find something and trap it but created something and left it locked inside Valgus’ head till someone accidentally busted it out.

Conor McGroarty

Thinking about it, would the liquid rainbow bone kill his mind? Or do his protections extend even to dubious psionic, mind killing, poison?

K

I figured it was difficult to try pretty much anything with Valgus. I assume just being within a certain distance just stops any chance of anything happening, and that he can only portal-eat 1 arm out of 6 before he could get anywhere near his head. Anything past a certain level usually means at least 1 revive so he'd need 2 extremely powerful moves that each have a low chance to succeed to actually kill Valgus. If everything went perfectly as planned then I'd assume we'd get to witness a fraction of Balodwah appear and nearly end the entire tournament instantly as a way to finish the show he wanted Valgus to produce.

William Christie

What other story?

William Christie

Thanks for the chaltt

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Scott Rutherford

You know, this story and maybe one other are my standard for LitRPG style stories. It is a pretty high bar.

Scott Rutherford

Then again, part of me wants to see Daniel get booted into the sky so hard he gets stuck himself in the pull of a black hole (just its edge) and the time dilation would be even stronger.. forcing him to train his way back, having one final growth burst before leaving this planet (and gaining the power needed to win the battle).

Scott Rutherford

I figured storing Valgus would be a temporary measure anyways.. something used just to transport Valgus to within the event horizon of the black hole where he can't escape as he slowly drifts towards a crushing hell. Meanwhile, Daniel would use his dimensional wake to slowly escape gravity's pull perhaps? After all, space and time are linked, right?

Scott Rutherford

That sounds fair. :) So, Daniel's greatest strength becomes the power of self-mastery.

Scott Rutherford

Incidentally, Daniel or the black hole serving as a new prison for Valgus had crossed my mind as well. Now to see if the author picks option three, the undiscovered plot device! As he's already touched upon the 'Daniel Storage' system as being less than easily obtained.

Scott Rutherford

This is why we do not speak of He-who-must-not-be-named! :)

OrganicMeat(2.0)

How do I still have access to this patreon post. Not that I’m complaining?

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

Monsoon117

I'll add a couple of mentions about Daniel attempting the shield and how Valgus counters it. Even a swipe of his arm destroys Daniel's body, and that makes it difficult to be near him. Valgus also has six arms he can empower at once. This leaves no openings. I mentioned all these factors but didn't elaborate on them in the concession. It felt like explaining the obvious, but I'm the author. It's difficult to discern what's obvious and what isn't from my position.

LeWorms

We witness the beginning of Daniel’s eternal prison. I can’t stress enough that I love this story. Thank you for everything you do Monsoon!

Gardor

Being able to counter it doesn't sound like toddler level fighting

Shin

Valgus knows the danger of daniels shield and has shown that he can counter it He wont go down that simply

Shin

Because he IS his own domain There influence inside his domain is limited because he has absolute authority in there and has enough power to keep them out Only thing keeping him back is his skill to manipulate his own existence their overwhelming advantage in experience and knowledge allows them to slip into his domain Thats my opinion at least

Austin Conrad

What I'm thinking is just YOINK Valgus into the dimensional shield, then proceed to use "I'll drop battle-enraged Valgus on you" as a threat to anyone who fucks with Daniel in the near future. Probably won't work on Schema, but should be a handy WMD to have in the pocket.

FlawlessMovement

I love this story

Gardor

He had confirmation his dimensional shield thing worked, and then never used it again. Feel like he could have made an opportunity to grab the head, if he's fighting a toddler in a giants body.

Scott Rutherford

Also, I like that Daniel can keep out that other Old One. He'll need to keep evolving his Dimensional Wake to protect himself and also, learning why it keeps the old one out may teach Daniel something about why the Old One's are somehow limited as they affect the reality Daniel and friends occupy. Daniel being a Dimension of his own may be tied to that limitation. We shall see. :)

Scott Rutherford

So, if Valgus is a prison for whatever is inside him... does that mean what the Old One did was a benefit for the galaxy? Or was it just a whim that could be helpful or harmful without knowing till we see it all at the end?

Scott Rutherford

Yup! When the boss starts flashing red and yellow, you know they are about dead, and likely to get even stronger ;) (anyone else play old NES games back in the day? lol) Don't let the boss achieve its final form!

Jayden Kirkham

Thanks for chapter!!! One small thing, maybe [And to you, I am finality incarnated."] Should simply be, incarnate, rather than incarnated? Idk it sounds more solid and badass at least to me but up to you! Thanks again!

Conor McGroarty

It really says something about how messed up you are when an Old One (Mesmera) thinks you are a broken, sad and pitiful existence.

Conor McGroarty

So we have Etormah, Baldowah, Eonoth and Mesmera. They are all infohazards in the sense that knowing and speaking their name helps them zero in on your existence (knowing of them makes them know of you). Mesmera though seems to exist entirely as a whispered infohazard. Eonoth is super loud and can be considered “her” opposite as it is loud and she is a whisper. Well it is a good thing there is a convenient black hole to serve as a new prison for Valgus. No need to worry about what lurks in his mind if you make it the black holes problem. Alternative would be having Daniel keep Valgus in his dimensional storage (ironically serving the purpose of prison Schema had mentioned as one of his plans for Daniel).

alexis avalos

So like schema talked about when daniel spoke to him on giess, so valgus probably has an immortal or something on that scale. Crazy to think about

Weebking12

Ohhhhh a prison

ClementCrown

God YES!!!!!

Weebking12

I glad you are liking it now

Conor McGroarty

This is Sparta!

Monsoon117

Fun chapter to write. I like writing Valgus because he's so different.


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