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357 Infiltration

🕑 Added 2022-07-07 22:36:54 +0000 UTC

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Chance Rose

I nodded, "I'll remake every last single one." Saying every last single one convolutes it. It should be either every single one, or every last one. Saying every last single one makes the sentence sound weird. Hope this clarified what I meant. Thanks again for the story man, I'll be buying the whole series when it out. You're up there with Brandon Sanderson in my book collection.

Monsoon117

Thanks for the fix.

Monsoon117

I wish I understood this. You mean the word both makes the sentence convoluted?

Chance Rose

Baldowah grabbed and pulled his hair, "Agh, but for what? And besides, how could I have known it was him anyway?". Hey monsoon, you wrote baldowah here instead of valgus

Chance Rose

I nodded, "I'll remake every last single one."

Chance Rose

Hey monsoon, just caught an editing thing I'd share and save you time. It should be every last or every single one. Saying both makes the sentence convoluted. If you want me to not bring these up just let me know! Thanks again.

Wrath

Wish we got more updates from Monsoon117 in general and not just chapters but blogs and posts.

Wrath

There is no new chapter yet. This has slowed down quite a bit for chapter releases to once a month it seems.

Jacob Goodwin

Can anyone see the chapter after this one?

K

Loved the chapter as always, excited to see what comes of the peace treaty now. It looks like Daniel may actually be in a stranglehold now. The absoluteness of the agreement is something I assume is capable of great harm if he spreads that information to relevant parties, or with intention of Elysium getting harmed. Tense!

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

William Christie

Still loving the story after years of reading! Keep up the good work!

Aleksander Lie

regarding last chapter, you are a parasite on a corpse? I'm calling it, they are parasites on the corpse of an Old One...

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

alexis avalos

Oh yea baby a triple

Psyren1596

Thanks for the chapter

Justin Drake

Tyftc!

Michael Moore

dude can't catch a break with Elysium

Qrystof

Holy moly. Too bad for Daniel. Elysium keeps showing up whenever he's just trying to get things done.

Monsoon117

These are fun, challenging chapters to write. I'm finally positioned in the story to tie together a lot of loose ends while presenting the beginning of a 'grand' narrative for the lack of a better word. Either way, I'm excited to show everyone where the story goes from here.


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