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359 Amassing Armadas

🕑 Added 2022-08-07 15:29:54 +0000 UTC

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Xepen

Well it’s been a long time since I have followed this story, and a while since I joined the patreon, but this is where I’m going to bow out. Probably one of my favorite stories I’ve read, but I can’t afford to pay anymore when I don’t get anything back sadly. And considering the update rate, it’ll be a long while till I get to read again. Hope y’all enjoy reading, and I hope you’re doing alright Monsoon.

Whids

I have to say your story is amazing and I am very into it. Would love to see some more content.

Firefox122

hey, monsoon, ya still alive buddy?

C.W.

I hope you start writing again soon. I really enjoy your story. Going to unsub for now but I'll be back once the story continues. Good luck.

Wrath

If you've ever hit A writer's block or something else has come up here, one thing that suggests is doing vlogs Or maybe posting up fan art.

FlawlessMovement

Just checking on you to make sure everything is still ok. Hope your doing well

Firefox122

dude you're doing great so far, try and only do a load that you are comfortable with in terms of how many chapters in a given time frame, if u start to get burnt out, slow down but don't outright stop, momentum is key. also I love this series, u do a great job with it and I don't find many points very confusing, its great aside from the odd grammatical mishap here or there, I cant wait to have the full book release lol

Firefox122

have u considered having someone or a set of people narrate this once its out or even as it's going? it would be cool to have an audiobook version of this to fall asleep to or listen on long car rides

Aleksander Lie

That is my thoughts around this book as well. While it may not be updated as much as other novels i read, the chapters that do Get posted are denser. More meaning in each sentence, if that makes sense? And for that I am willing to wait longer (:

Stefan Mensink

I don't really mind the slow updates. Sure I'd like more, but these chapters are dense and complex so I understand it may take a while to write.

Monsoon117

Also, if you can remember which details are confusing, it would be helpful to mention what and why. It can be difficult to know what parts aren't clear and what parts are from an author's standpoint sometimes.

Monsoon117

I'll see if I can't clear up the details more then. I was trying to foreshadow certain elements without being too obvious, but I could've simply bitten off more than I could chew for this arc. I'll have to see if I can't get everything involved expressed in a more comprehensible way though. As for my updates, you're definitely correct. If I want a larger subscriber base then I need more consistency. Anytime I've tried ramping up my production, I tend to burn out. I also handle feedback poorly, at least from a mental health standpoint. It weighs on me more than it should, and it's not really the fault of the readers. Regardless, I'm glad you decided to subscribe at all. Have a good one.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

C.W.

This whole arch, on this planet, the writting has been very confusing on whats going on. The details i mean, the overall story isn't to hard to follow. But unclear details make it hard to read. Also going to be honest I joined last month when there was 1 chapter released in more than a month. And I looked for a notification that author was on vacation or something but didn't see anything. Work on how you describe things, communicate with subscribers better, and also I won't continue to subscribe if there aren't even 1 or 2 chapters a week at least. So not to be a total dick I do like the story so far its why I subbed last month. I hope thing improve because I want to continue to enjoy this story.

ChrollosLucifer

Uuriyah is Valgus' name.

Mastermazer

The Vagni are the fish people that worship the eldritch. The Uuriyah (I think) are the species that had all their minds mushed into one.

Conor McGroarty

Who or what is Uuriyah and the Vagni again? Between updates it can get hard to remember these details. I do remember the lizard people though. In addition, would be good to have that cipher contract adding a clause that an extension of time can be negotiated if notable progress has been made. “Nice” that Shalahora’s species isn’t completely lost even though they are currently smushed together (though it doesn’t seem like they are a hive mind or anything like that).

Justin Drake

TYFTC!


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