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361 Out With Weakness

🕑 Added 2022-11-05 14:22:25 +0000 UTC

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Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Alex R

I've be willing to [be] -> bet

Blake Richardson

Thank you for the chapter

FlawlessMovement

I did not see this GLORIOUS reply, this is exactly what I’m talking about! No matter what the subject you can WRITE with the best of em

Monsoon117

Challenge accepted. Daniel - "Bricks. There's a lot to them you wouldn't initially think about. They have a lot in common with adobe for instance. Both are heated clay and soil, yet bricks are much more durable. They are able to survive harsh winds and rain or kinetic impacts that would topple adobe. The difference comes in what forged them. Adobe is forged in the light of the sun. Bricks are forged in the heat of fire. One is a filler while the other is a source of support. One is made with ease while the other is difficult to create. One of those is made by simply waiting and the other requires intentional effort. Me? I'd like to think I'm made of bricks. I work hard every day to make that happen, but anyone can do the same. It's a choice, and your world will forge you. We decide what that forge will be, and it is presented to us every day. To be forged to stone, you must walk through fire, not lounge in the sun."

FlawlessMovement

I meant to say this under the last chap but I was broke lol. You should never worry about “post anxiety” I get worrying over what people will think but I think you’re REALLY underestimating both your skill and our enjoyment of your story lol. It’s hard for me to phrase “you could just have a chapter straight of Daniels internal monologue about a brick and it would be interesting” into something that sounds reasonable lol

Monsoon117

I'm glad to hear it. Thanks for supporting me for so long and so fervently. You guys are quite literally why I'm still at this and why I intend to keep getting after it.

Zachary Smith

Love the story man. As long as you want to write it I’m here to read it. I really amazed at the world you’re building it’s so unique and interesting and has a bunch of themes that I adore in a story.

Hayden Pech

Dope! Thanks for the chapter!!

Monsoon117

The burst-and-bust cycle hasn't been good for my mental health at all, so that's why I'm trying to break it. I could also write a bunch of chapters and post it slower than otherwise which could also work. Hmm...It's something to think about for sure.

Jonathan

I think you just need to accept that you are a 'burst' writer and, as you are now, take advantage of the fact that right now you're feeling it. When it's not there, accept that, too, and do other things and stop beating yourself up about it. 'It' will probably come back faster when you're not making yourself feel like shit for not writing. That will be $.03, please. (It used to be $.02, but inflation is pretty bad these days.)

Aji Monzal Piper

Hell yeah!

Monsoon117

This is the first chapter I've posted in a while where I felt actually ramped up. I tend to rely on momentum while writing, and it's always helped me bolster the quality and quantity of my work. I intend on maintaining it this time.


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