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371 A Scarred Return

🕑 Added 2023-02-23 14:13:20 +0000 UTC

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Conor McGroarty

Out of all the crap Elysium pulled on Leviathan, unchaining Valgus and killing most of the surviving rulers under Daniel’s protection hurt the most as they were hopeful to make it out. Plus the implanted hybrid bs and all the other things doesn’t help either. Daniel’s patience for them is at an end and it is understandable why he is taking it out on this messenger. Although his group haven’t had the debriefing yet to catch them up on the context of Daniel’s current state.

Conor McGroarty

Considering Elysium is on the move already, that meeting needs to be had immediately. Also has Florence lost one of his relatives besides Obolis who was MIA? Like the blind guy whose name I forgot (just remembered it is Helios)? Or the chick who kinda competes with Helios? Or the brick wall guy?

Khent Mercer

Let the good times roll.

William Christie

Thanks for another amazing chapter! I'm loving the bulk updates this month, keep up the amazing work! Thanks!

Kemizle

TFTC it was a blast

Kemizle

I feel Helios survived just cause Danny didn't learn to warp yet

Monsoon117

Really? Hell yeah.

FlawlessMovement

I don’t know exactly what you’ve changed, but dialogue and interpersonal relationships literally exploded in quality. And it’s very very noticeable

Wrath

Absolutely amazing how many chapters were getting this month. I am absolutely astatic and amazed. I was worried About you and your continued story.

Shin

Or the sisters Florence had quite a few siblings

Chance Rose

Bro this chapter was on point. I think I felt as happy as Daniel was described just reading it. I missed everyone. I get the eerie feeling that Helios got killed in the lottery. That would be sad. But, loss happens and it's a real reminder of others mortality.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Shin

Like one abyss gazing at another...

Justin Drake

Tyftc

Hayden Pech

Dope :) nice homecoming :)

Illue

Hod’s explanations are always supreme in their simplicity, it just takes a great and vast mind like Shalahora’s to understand the depth of Hod

K

Hod's explanation felt like a mental flashbang. Great to see everyone again.

Zachary Smith

Was awesome 👏

Rafael Nehou

"All's fair in love and war." Loved it. I have to admit, I missed Hod and Althea a lot more than I thought. Can't wait to see what everyone has to say about what they should do next.

crusty pickle

Thanks for the chapter monsoon, I like how people that have been around Daniel for so long just ignore shalahoras lvl

Aleksander Lie

Nice

Whids

Awsome Chapter

Zachary Smith

Omg omg omg let’s goooooo! Thank you 🙏

Monsoon117

I know, I know, a chapter already. Hold the applause.../s Anyways, I enjoyed this chapter. It was challenging but fun because of how many personalities were present. I love these characters, and having a new one mesh is exciting for me since it allows me to explore different facets of them. It's also interesting trying to show so many different plot threads tangling together cohesively without bogging down the pacing. Let me know what you guys think.


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