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372 A Broken Trust

🕑 Added 2023-02-25 21:54:43 +0000 UTC

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Monsoon117

If one lottery has been infiltrated, others could be as well.

Conor McGroarty

Isn’t it a slaughter to participate in such a lottery if you don’t have a sovereign class? Unless you are matched with those of your own classes/level range. Still, isn’t it too early to conclude they are all dead since the lottery with Obolis just ended and Helios hasn’t gotten back yet either? Granted they would likely answer messages assuming they were capable of doing so (conscious, not in stasis, not dead, etc).

Conor McGroarty

I believe Helios is still MIA since he participated in a different lottery (were the three primary basic classes Speaker, Breaker and Fringe Walker?). Maybe exclusive to his class instead of rulers/sovereigns.

Conor McGroarty

I have no context about how and why Florence and Obolis are down many (most?) family members. Feels like a missed a chapter but I know it is because Florence didn’t want to talk about it. Though how did Obolis know family died when he just came out of stasis and had no message? Did he see it in Florence’s expression? Maybe clarify that a little if so? I guess they died during the lottery but not to the lottery itself.

Monsoon117

Schema mentioned multiple lotteries, and Obolis's children are considered rulers. Obolis also mentioned worrying about some of his children in other lotteries while they were on L-7.

Conor McGroarty

So how did all of Obolis’ children die (all family or just kids)? Was it Elysium or something? How did Obolis know that family died (did he see it on Florence?)? Or did they have their own lotteries? It is like I missed a chapter since I have no context.

Etez

Man, I am crying

Monsoon117

I don't take it as being difficult. In fact, it's funny because I know you guys are frothing at the mouth for it, but it just wouldn't make sense for Daniel to push seeing these people aside to handle his status. He's missing them a lot, and I got to respect his characterization first. The chapter after the next one will have it.

Monsoon117

Ah, I can clarify that in the previous chapters. Thanks for letting me know.

FlawlessMovement

Sorry man I was drinking last night and re read the chapter. Was being difficult lmao

Connor Alexander

No sorry I meant I thought he saved multiple within his lotto within the armband. Didn’t make where he got the rulers clear enough.

Monsoon117

Naw, my slow release schedule is why you guys forgot. I'll put a recap in the next chapter's beginning so that the facts are laid out real quick to get everyone up to speed.

Monsoon117

I know, I know. It'll be there soon.

Erich Hansson

This is why I shouldn't read new releases when they arrive in the middle of the night😁

Shin

All of Obolis children own 1 or more planets and are considered rulers except for Florence Thus they had to take part in the lotteries And it seems none survived

Shin

Not even close The vast mayority of them died in the battle against valgus Only a handful survived by hiding in that pocket dimension and a few in critical health he put in stasis in his personal dimension

Shin

Seems not

FlawlessMovement

This has incredible dialogue and emotional depth, no doubt about it. But man I want to see that status screen lmao

Erich Hansson

Yea first read trough I fealt that he saved all or most rulers in the manna reactor pocket

Monsoon117

What do you mean he got all of the rulers? Do you mean Daniel collected all of the rulers?

Monsoon117

Daniel has Followers, but a Ruler subclass revolves around ownership of territories. Daniel hasn't given ownership of Blegara or Earth to anyone, and Schema hasn't formally recognized it either. He only owned Blegara and not Earth. That being said, I could've placed that at some point earlier in the text, and if that's the case, I need to go and fix that.

FlawlessMovement

All of his children are rulers

drag0nreb0rn

I dont understand how all of the althea died and not just the ones that went to the lottery?

Kemizle

Did Helios survive?

Zachary Smith

Nice work again monsoon you are slaying

FlawlessMovement

He got multiple from his lotto. Nowhere near all….and there were multiple lotteries

Erich Hansson

I read the same thing as Connor Alexander From what i understood he got all the rulers ? Exept for the confusion from that, a good chapter

Connor Alexander

I thought Daniel had multiple rulers, but I must’ve misread. Damn, what a loss on all ends.

K

It felt like just the right amount of grieving to me. Obolis is gonna have a lot of trouble finding replacement rulers, and I look forward to seeing whether or not he'll keep his reverence to Schema after the news.

Joshua Little

He mentioned that most of them were rulers. I assume there were other lotteries. There was some insinuation that something might happen to them during the lottery.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Yanni

There were multiple lottery’s and every single one of Obolis’s children was a ruler of a planet. And we know that they had their own strengths wether it was combat prowess, administrative duties, or a combination of the two. But if they faced even half of what Daniel did with his time on leviathan then they would have next to no chance of survival.

Chance Rose

I pulled my armor back with difficulty. I'm thinking you meant aura here.

Chance Rose

Two parts I want to address, is when torix asks Daniel to undo the chains. "Would remove them?" you need to throw a you in there. The second is what happened to the diplomat? Did they leave him suspended there or? They just kind of left for the meeting. I don't mean to jump the gun if that just hadn't been resolved yet.torix said the diplomat didn't know where the base was, so I doubt they just sent him on his way alone to wander the area. (Never mind on part two, here I forgot it said torix put him to sleep)

Chance Rose

Great chapter man, and don't worry. While yes melodrama is not good in large portions, Florence is part of the main group, and his loss deserved the attention it got.

Austin Caudill

I don't remember it mentioning his family is dead?

Monsoon117

Let me know what you guys think. I wanted to give the issues a moment, but I never want to broach melodrama with any of my work. It cheapens everything, and I know I can get into it if I'm not careful. Any writer can, really.


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