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373 An Empire's Fall and Rise

🕑 Added 2023-02-27 23:36:33 +0000 UTC

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William Christie

Thanks for the reply! Yeah, I'm super excited, it s been so long since we've seen stats or skills! Things are just getting crazier! Thanks for the amazing writing!

Monsoon117

I assure you it does not help make it easier but makes it juicier.

William Christie

Also that status cliff-hanger is killing me!!!! Its been so long, and I can imagine that its a pain for you to calculate right now with all the multiplicative values affecting one another. Doesn't help that he absorbed trillions of mana from Valgus probably?

William Christie

Im so sad, I loved the entire Nvos family so much. So many amazingly designed and well thought out characters and personalities. I know death is how authors build meaning and depth but this hurts.

Monsoon117

*In an astronaut suit with a pistol* Always will.

the void

Did he just… status cliffhanger us?

Monsoon117

I will.

Monsoon117

I've been watching Breaking Bad recently, and they always foreshadow future plot and character developments with subtle demonstrations like that. I'm glad it came through in an enjoyable way and not in a disruptive one.

Shin

I quite liked the little pokemon quip from Hod 🀣🀣🀣 I really missed that guy

Connor Alexander

Super awesome chapter! Thanks Monsoon!

drag0nreb0rn

You are on a roll....... keep up the great work.

Alex R

I'm really looking forward to the trees and perks. They are my favorite part of the system. They are always interesting.

K

It's been so long since a single status was shown! I figured they were gonna be part of the story but not shown to us because it's been so long... over a year.

Zachary Smith

I liked the dialogue

Chance Rose

Great chapter again as always man. I'm loving this roll you're on.

Chance Rose

Dang. I didn't realize it had been that long.

rizen

Haha strong Dr Manhatten vibes this chapter lol. I definitely liked the dynamicism of the explanations of what happened during the lottery as well as the future plans being targeted to each of the allies daniel has cultivated over the course of the story. The use of the mana types to illustrate the perspective he held on each of the entities was a great way of understanding his thought process as well as emotional state. I'm excited to be back in training/ builder mode again, especially now with his allies right next to him.

Kristopher Abraham

Could see it going a few ways. Steps on a twig, level up notification. Planet explodes. Or... Steps on a twig, level up notification. Daniel starts to grimace and feel like something very powerful is building up inside of him and then slightly burps.

Bonesaw

man teasing the status screen so ready for the next chapter

crusty pickle

I would honestly be worried about leveling up if I were Daniel, the sheer amount of mana he's gonna put off is gonna be very dangerous

Rafael Nehou

So anyway, I started blasting

Monsoon117

325 Legacies and Lineage https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/12024/the-new-world/chapter/832433/325-legacies-and-lineage

Illue

Oh man, it’s been so long since I’ve seen his status, I wonder how much it’s changed. When was the last chapter we were shown his status btw? I can’t really remember…

Zachary Smith

Oh shit monsoon you do it again with a brand new kickass chapter. Bravo!

Monsoon117

So I decided against the fact update and instead tried to have everything clarified in the talk. Also, I've had several meeting chapters and breakdown ones, which always felt stale. With this one, I tried to make it more dynamic and interesting with a few techniques. Let me know if the scene flowed well and seemed discernably different from the other ones. Also, big status update hype.


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