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381 Another Antecedence

🕑 Added 2023-03-15 23:39:40 +0000 UTC

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Shadeymankey

…no. Nobody survived once their minds died

justin

I know it seems with his ability to make golems he is going to wipe the floor with his enemies but he has not secured earth yet and there are literally billions and billions now arranged against him. Build fortress earth then unleash the might of his army. That would be so cool.

Chance Rose

I am glad I'm on the right track even if I'm completely wrong thanks bro. Loving the story can't wait for today's chapter

Monsoon117

There is a reason for this, and I have it plotted out. Outside of that, I won't say anything. EDIT: But I do want to.

Monsoon117

Ah, I see what you mean. I find Elysium to be the most impressive faction powerwise as well. I was worried you thought Daniel's power was unearned/total bs. I wanted to know why and see if I could fix it. And the armor began as eldritch skin. It absorbed loads of interdimensional energy, and that changed its course dramatically. After that, Daniel turned from eldritch to dimension. It's part of the reworked early story.

Chance Rose

You know,I just thought of something. They compared Daniels aura to an old ones. They said it felt remarkably similar.... Are the old ones their own living dimensions? Is that why Daniel is able to deal with them? Just like they are unable to be influenced by this dimension and can manipulate it, aren't they just a more aged and powerful version of what Daniel is growing to be? Just a thought.

Rubeno

I have read my origin comment again and found it now little too strong in my unfortunate choice of words. To clarify, in my first comment I wanted to underscore that Daniel's miraculous armor granted him endless potential and survivability and combined with his determination allows him to only then match efforts of Elysium who were left with orthodox means to gain personal power and they have only have unreliable access to bullshit types of power by proxy like Lehesion. Let me also be clear I enjoy Daniel's special powers ;) they are fun to read about and fhey feel earned as he wasn't just granted them for no reason

Monsoon117

He killed several agents as well. I'll lower it a pinch and make it more clear he was killing Elysium peeps.

Monsoon117

Why do you think Daniel's potential is ridiculous or bullshit? Edit: I didn't mean this to come across harshly or anything, but rereading it, the cursing doesn't help.

Rubeno

That is actually good point. What if there are many of the same type of planet sized eldritch? Moreover Elysium seems to be getting access to many sources of Primevals and psionic liquid. It will be absolute shit show. Even Daniel who can eviscerate Eonoth pawn in one tap at most can solo 5 Primevals at the same time. While Elysium will have access to several eldritch like L-7

ChrollosLucifer

It's possible they're both orbiting the same black hole. Daniel's L-7 was either closer or older with stronger eldritch.

FlawlessMovement

As fast as he can create new bodies and charge his grimor for inscriptions

Rubeno

That is actually an interesting idea. Daniel was shown to still fear Yawm even if he is dead.

Areshan

Having one of the old ones use yawms image to f with Daniel at some point might be interesting from a psychological perspective

Rubeno

It's good idea to end things on the high note rather than drag them endlessly. Yawm was great but he wasn't had enough of material to matter in the long run. He may have had became tiring as you woild have to invent new philosophy for him as old one splintered unless you wouldn't have revealed his flaws back then as they were and just jumped him elsewhere so he develop as worthy Adversary for Daniel.

Ben Andrews

The likeness of L-6 and L-7 seems surprising. Or was that laid out at the beginning of the lottery arc? I would have enjoyed an expansion of that dialogue but understand balancing brevity for pacing. I'm curious to see how that survival number from Helios is handled since I don't think anyone considers an Elysium puppet "alive". not to mention the immediate casualties upon exiting the lottery.

Monsoon117

Same. Yawm was great to write. I didn't want him to die at the end, but it is what it is.

Rubeno

You know, I really like villains in this story. They can be convincing in their conviction despite their obvious flaws like kind of Obolis and Yawm definitely. In fact Yawm remains my favorite enemy in this novel.

Rubeno

Frankly I'm in awe over Elysium means. Despite violating ethics it hasn't affected their prosperity. As always it's power that matters in the end. Seriously it feels that only Daniel can do something about their situafion and only because he js miracle child acquiring godlike potential due to some ridiculous bullshit. Meanwhile Elysium crafted their power step by step.

Zachary Smith

Woah

the void

I’m willing to bet that the crisis is the old ones

Rubeno

It's hilarious how everybody created their own thrones. It felt like gathering of villains debating over world domination.

Charles handgis

Time to flip the board, I don’t think Daniel will be swayed to look kindly on elysium again. Great chapters man the story is fire right now.

Chance Rose

I liked the chapter very much. The unique thrones we're also a very nice touch. Seeing torix banter with Daniel brings out the roots of his own...humanity? (We've never really addressed what the people of torixs planet were, but I'd assume at least human esque by his first form. ) The way I see it, unless Daniel really ups his dimension mastery, everything else is just small fry at this point. An army of golems would be relatively easy to bust out in his current state, so increasing his forces is not an issue. He could even go Elysium and give every citizen a personal golem with complete loyalty to him and his directives so they could not be used for ill means. The problem I'm seeing is the whimsical nature of the old ones. When they can just pop in and do whatever, he needs to be able to fend them off. There's nothing stopping any one of them from just coming forth and messing up the " pieces of their game". Daniels wake is all that lets him do so, and we've been demonstrated that while his will is iron, that will only get him so far. Elysium is obviously taking advantage of avatars and such, and as such will only increase the risk they pose to Daniels assets. I'm looking forward to seeing how this is all addressed and keep it up man, you're doing amazing

justin

I am interested in seeing how he builds an army that can defend and attack all his enemies. He barely controls a state level amount of territory in north American going up against millions or billions forces from many rulers.

justin

Shouldn't the number of survivors be a little less? Reading Helios tale it seemed he had killed more like 5-7 (ie several).

Kemizle

Elysium is playing 4D chess lol

Jonathan

That's always been the quandary with Elysium: A likely noble goal with intolerable means. Daniel's future at this point would likely to be to kill all of Elysium, the Old Ones, and Schema, or at the very least, rewrite Schema to be almost unrecognizable. About Schema, I believe that it took it's current form and power under some sort of crisis protocol and is maintaining the crisis in order to remain in power.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Jeremiah

Looks great! Very interesting developments.

Monsoon117

This is the last full discussion chapter for a bit. There will be more training, action, etc. in the next few chapters. Let me know if anything seems a bit off or too much, as always. I'll be reading the comments and listening to anything constructive.


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