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382 An Earned Intermission

🕑 Added 2023-03-18 03:21:53 +0000 UTC

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Scott Rutherford

Right? You mentioned Althea talking to Daniel about pre Schema Earth culture almost preparing people for Schema with video games and certain types of literature. That's what gave me the idea to have that re-introduced with modern Schema tech used to help. The interface could be tech, magic or even psionic.. or a mix. Just imagine all those mom's who thought their kids were wasting their time on video games. Also, depending on the interface.. your physical as well as mental capabilities (and skills) could be part of how well you use the game. So kids may use the gym to get fit or play games with non-combat skill training so they'd be better prepared for a game that focuses on or at least incorporates those skills. Like a VR dungeon run with monsters, traps or puzzles. Expand it more so they can use craft skills before the dungeon run inside the game, if the student wishes for such exposure before focusing towards a future class. I could see this, if successful, being sold to other guilds and planets once the bugs are worked out. Especially if the games can be made Massive Multiplayer Online types. Might even be sold to pre Schema worlds to better prepare them before Schema's Tutorial sets in. This type of thing would be a foot note in your story but other stories focus on this as an underlying plot device or major aspect of the world for the MC. I doubt Daniel would ever use it unless it had some time dilation built in, which is also common in other stories. Much the reason Daniel wants L-7, more time means more growth. As I recall, Daniel won a contest and received a skill book that let him live in a time dilated Virtual Realm with some assistance to help him create a skill. I think he broke the assistant but he used the time and space given to good effect. Might be something to bring back into the story, perhaps remade by Daniel and friends to help his guild. To keep it footnote worthy, it could be limited in effectiveness to only those in the very early levels (like children or those very new to Schema) that way its more useful for setting a foundation. No making mythic skills here. The more experienced types should be out in the world tackling real dungeons or other non-combat roles.

Monsoon117

Genius. The previous culture of earth could be retained and turned into something productive for the Schema-based world. Every gamer would be like a hardcore student of today's world.

Scott Rutherford

Ooh, an idea came to mind when thinking about the orphanages and the 'indirect' experience. Why not tie the 'button' which indirectly grants experience into learning style video games? The games could be old school 2D types or more modern VR types. The games could encourage skill growth utilizing crafting, exploration, perhaps various types of combat or puzzle games, the list goes on. That way the children could safely acquire and polish skills in combat and non-combat areas. They could build a foundation to one day become craftsmen, merchants, warriors, explorers, really anything skills are built around with their skill trees perhaps less limited.

Scott Rutherford

What I don't get is.. oh, and love the chapter by the way.. if he has many minds.. why can't he have many bodies within his dimensional wake? That is the limit of his 'body' right? It has to exist within the wake? Why can't he make two or three of himself (or one smaller him and do something else with the rest of the mass) without needing a tether between the bodies? Isn't the wake like, the real him?

Monsoon117

Hah, thanks man.

Conor McGroarty

Dealing with his height by just “slightly connecting it” away from the rest of him is smart.

Richard A. Goodwin Jr.

I just stumbled across The New World on RoyalRoad a week ago. No surprise, I haven't gotten much done since! I am loving the story. I very much appreciate the attention your detail in the various stats, buffs, etc. Thanks for posting the spreadsheets early on. Thanks also for sticking with the writing. Based on the comments you made at the start of some chapters, it has been a 'long, strange trip'! Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to seeing Daniel build his empire - and how he takes care of Elysium, Schema, and the Old Ones!

Matthew T

Between the ability to exist as a (presumably weightless) cloud of dimensional energy and the ability to completely liquify his body, it seems that his size and weight is more of a mental block than a physical limitation. In the end, what's stopping him from leaving his massive body behind and molding a smaller one? Or even one that looks more human. Or hell, even a gialgathan one (pardon my spelling)? He isn't his body anymore, he's proved that many times, so a static body shape is an odd limitation. The three answers I can think of are 1), a mental block where that's just how he views himself and it shapes his reality (like Superman having to breathe), b) a limitation that Schema has posed on him based on his system defined abilities, or III) a built in limitation on his dimensional abilities from his original armor via Baldug-Ruhl, which between Paldia and his own abilities he may overcome.

Chance Rose

Great chapter man, I like that skipping the whole f'ing shebang now. It was fine the first time or two as it explained how it worked, I'm just not a big erotica fan so the intimacy is nice without the descriptors. Mt Verner is described beautifully without pulling a Tolkien and spending eight pages describing a tree. I really want to see Daniel create a castle like city. It would be a nice fantasy twist in a sci-fi magic setting. Plus, he could have a permanent throned out round table for his leadership. He's human so he knows of Arthur and it would be a really cool aesthetic that seems like everyone liked. This is just some input, do you man. Loving the story and the pacing is phenomenal. I would love to see a dragoon golem as well to lead the other combat ones. Idk why it is just a really cool visual in my mind, a massive winged golem with horns as a general sounds cool to me.

Aji Monzal Piper

It’s technically a grammatical error. But generally inconsequential the difference between when and whenever is certainly ambiguous, i had to google the official difference

Zachary Smith

Man I was so waiting for there date chapter it’s nice. Also all of them in thrones was dope af imagery!

Monsoon117

This is true, and I've made this mistake consistently whenever I rushed. I can edit the chapter with control+F and change that real quick. Thanks for the help.

Monsoon117

I mentioned his size many times in this chapter. Eg, he eats outside the restaurant because he can't fit inside. Everyone gawks at him as he passes. He can't move through Mt. Verner comfortably anymore so he liquified himself. His apartment is cramped so he makes size adjustments there. Althea's jumping over him constantly and having to leap around to talk. She even walks on him at one point because of how big he is. More examples I thought of. He dwarfs the small eldritch cage entirely, and he mentions being tall as a tree. He sat over the couch, not on it. The mug is comedically small in his hand. Guys, I made a determined effort to demonstrate his size and how he's working around his limitations. Controlling his mass is definitely something Daniel will be working on, but as Daniel mentioned, Mt. Verner could be wiped off the map at present.

Shane Fletcher

my favorite part is the golem building. i want to see him leading hoards of them from planet to planet destroying his enemies. if he can teach them the cipher them could make more of themselves, and then he would be the creator of a golem race.

Quin marsh

Small complaint, (not just you nearly everybody), whenever is not when

justin

Yes building montage

justin

I too think it is ridiculous. He can change his density, he can change all the forces, and he can change shape, so he should be any height he wants to be. It seems a limitation he has out grown.

FlawlessMovement

We are about to see my literal favorite part of this story. The building

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Austin Caudill

In the future yeah, I'd fully expect a skill or something that lets him not be 27 feet tall. None of that is relevant to why it's not being mentioned NOW. He isn't able to be less large as far as we've been informed now so it should definitely be mentioned.

Kemizle

I think his size and weight can become more flexible if her merges that size shifting skill into the sovereign skill he should be building. his control of gravity could get to the point where he weighs what ever he wants

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

K

The length of the chapter was a pleasant surprise. One thing I'm curious about is whether it's possible to have a planetary shield or not. I imagine it wouldn't be quick to build but I could see some restless constructor golems adding another layer to Earth's core and stuffing it full of blue orbs, or a single giant red orb. Could do a lot with full control over a planet, even its gravity.

Austin Caudill

Solid chapter, love the more human interaction, but his height compared to Althea/other people/normal architecture is getting almost comedic with how little it's mentioned. His last compressed height minimum which was like 26-27 feet or something.

Owen Kaz

Yeh 110. And I never realized how much Daniels experience mirrored hers until she pointed it out. Glad they have eachother. And I can't wait for the building montage. Spartan grind time 117

Matthew T

Thank you for the chapter!

Monsoon117

That's right. I got it out. 5,600 words, polished, and in two days. Sure, I worked a little overtime. Sure, I might need a day off after this one. Perhaps I have a little cabin fever and such. Doesn't matter. The man, the myth, the machine known as Monsoon117 got it done. Jk-ish. Anyways, this was a fun chapter to write. It's such a pleasant change of pace, and it was also fun to explore Althea's character more. It makes her seem so real and fun. I hope you all enjoyed it.


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