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387 The Makings of an Empire

🕑 Added 2023-03-30 01:47:40 +0000 UTC

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Scott Rutherford

Wait, did I just suggest the Sentinel that makes other Sentinels from X-men? :-o

Scott Rutherford

I'm just popping back into the previous posts here to look at comments... We have Hod and Shalahora.. could either of them be good human detectors? Or is there some kind of Schema tech to help locate displaced persons?

Numan

Oh mamá!! Now i am hyped even more. Yeah!. So much potential there

Monsoon117

That's the plan.

Monsoon117

It would be more useful to have current numbers, but Daniel doesn't know what's out there. He's operating off of estimates since that's likely closer to the truth than nothing.

Scott Rutherford

I'm expecting Daniel to eventually make a Golem Factory golem.. one with a bunch of cores and the ability to make all the types of golems (though perhaps more slowly than Daniel) needed for a city. Plop one or more of these down on a planet and let the terraforming commence.

Numan

Geat chapter I dont know if you already have plan the conquest of earth but i have a sugestiong. It would be great if in his conquering of other zones Daniel interact with other human Guids or alíen Guids which get ventage of the needy human in danger. I think that seeing a Daniel and Helios deal with humans how take power in the apocaliptic World Will be great. Mostly when other facet of daniel could be explored, conqueror, leader, using his charm to win the people

Wrath

Very thoughtful chapter. I guess Conquering. is going to be a lot more hard than I thought.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter. I think Daniel is on the right track but he needs to delegate. He should tell the Executive golem his plan and have it arrange everything and it can just send him groups when the golems and equipment are ready and arrange for Helios to teleport the team to a city. What were once dungeoneer teams can now be city establishment teams that can have their own local dungeons etc and he can focus on mass production as he should.

FlawlessMovement

Thank you so much, good to finally see the full management plan and details from the screens too

Matthew T

*me after seeing the chapter name* [grapefruit emoji]

K

There's something about status messages that never fail to satisfy me.

justin

Ah yes now it makes sense go where the most people used to be as that might help find people now. I think 5 years is long enough for a lot of movements and there could be places that weren't hit as hard so they didn't die off as much so old population numbers aren't going to be useful after such a long time. Also it might be best to focus where the monsters are thinnest. Then consolidate the survivors into those locations.

justin

He could have ask people for status then received the exposition. He could have argued or discussed options. He could weighted his options with pros and cons as he discussed things with his generals. We could have gotten more information about rhe world. We could have gotten some information about changes to different places over time or types of monsters in different areas. We could have gotten more information what his plans are for the lizards. We could have gotten more information on the state of folems and guilds clearing or building things. We could get info on the research or building of the collages. We could have gotten info on resources or material available to the guild or him. A lot of things could have been used as filler

Monsoon117

Per million in the pre-system era. A golem and one person couldn't help a million people, but the misunderstanding makes perfect sense.

Bonesaw

I mean I guess that is true but due to the fact that I read like a machine it seemed way shorter

justin

I am no writer but what was left just didn't feel complete.

justin

Yes small because nothing happened. He just read his screen (info dump) and talk what he might do.

Russel Pattison

I think the reason why it felt short was because it was a info dump chapter. Not complaining though it's certainly necessary it just goes by quicker when there isn't as much action as usual

justin

After 5 years of monsters and famine I doubt there are millions of people in any one grouping any where left on earth. This is worst than the bronze age collapse so there might be groups as large as a few thousands people at the max unless there is so story reason why a certain group is bigger.

Chance Rose

Great chapter man, I like the plan moving forward and can't wait to see it enacted. Keep it rolling bro

Monsoon117

I ended up having a chapter that was like 7,000+ words, and it had all these contrasting elements that just didn't mesh well. I decided to split them into different chapters so that I could really let each part shine and do its thing. Anyways, enjoy guys.

Monsoon117

Is 3,000 words short these days? That's, like, 11 pages in a novel.

Bonesaw

Ah a short but good chapter like always


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