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392 A City Alive

🕑 Added 2025-02-28 00:31:46 +0000 UTC

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Chance Rose

Liked Neel a ton. He definitely encapsulated what you wanted in the disappointed drill serg. This is interesting, I'm wondering who is just opening actual rifts in space and leaving them. Did elysium confiscate the spears of the seers and are now using them in an act of aggression against Daniel's world after their treaty?

Monsoon117

This was a fun chapter to write. It held a lot of exploration, bits of foreshadowing, and some setup for later while nestling in some neat characters. Imo, Neel came across as a far more pronounced character than I remembered, but I'm sticking with it regardless. It really makes him pop so to speak.


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