Patrefans
Monsoon117 from patreon
Monsoon117 patreon

398 A Hollow Invasion

🕑 Added 2025-03-06 00:39:29 +0000 UTC

Comments

Shin

The end reminds of the movie "Lord of War"

Monsoon117

Definitely a bitchslap.

panfam

Did the Executive deflect the rail gun or 90° bitch slap it? This is important

Felipe Andrade

It’s like he has adhd, he’s trying to do everything, from chapter to chapters the focus changes wildly. Some chapters felt a bit like a therapy session as well. He needs a secretary golem 😅

Monsoon117

I'll add a touch more to Daniel's internal thoughts throughout his convo with Echo. I think that'll make it smoother, and it's as Jonas said. Daniel has saved the Eltari, Vagni, albony, gialgathens, and skeptiles before he's saved humanity. From Daniel's perspective, there simply is no limit to the amount of help people need, and he's tired of having his priorities split.

Jonas

To be fair, daniel hasn't had a chance to take over earth since Schema came, and that usually what planets do when chema comes, so his frustration is understandable regarding not wanting moee and more on his plate.

Kurt A

Daniel comes off a bit cold here, and I think it could be remedied by him remembering that just a few chapters ago he decided to keep interacting with others instead of cutting himself off. That logic could extend to helping other species instead of being isolationist. Maybe. Either way this was a nice chapter, especially with how the guild got a chance to shine.

Monsoon117

This was also a fun chapter to write. I always love fleshing out fight scenes, and it's fun to have them involve describing characters other than Daniel too. Aside from that, I enjoy writing Florence as a character. He's fun.


More Creators