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295 A Convincing Argument

🕑 Added 2020-12-16 21:49:51 +0000 UTC

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Monsoon117

The formatting for these fixes is excellent. Thanks for the help.

Corwin Amber

'was always useful, but it would' -> 'was always useful and it would' (or something similar) 'outright chaos ensues' ensues -> ensued

EvilGodAsura

Thank goodness your still alive thats all the notice I needed at least.

Idan tal

I was, and still, hopping it’s because you’re having a great time with the wife. Good luck 😁

Monsoon117

I'm still here, I'm just having to deal with some personal issues right now. I'm really sorry for the unexpected pause, and I'm trying to get back into writing. It's just very difficult right now.

Wrath

hey if you're still there please give us some kind of update about what's going on .

Codename; Hentai

No.

EvilGodAsura

Lost arcane emperor and monads stories suddenly already i can't handle losing this one as well!

Kingtie

Shhh maybe we can guilt him into releasing triple chapters

stellerbattle

hey when the new chapter coming

drag0nreb0rn

Bro. Could we..... get a chapter

Wrath

everything all right? Haven't seen a new chapter for a while. This novel The only thing I have to look forward to reading so I check everyday. Hope everything is the great with you and your wife

EvilGodAsura

Just want to remind you that your a god and I will follow this novel to the end!

drag0nreb0rn

Bruh

Monsoon117

Nope. We just got married, so she's a new wife but an old flame, so to speak.

s476

Also has there been an old wife?

s476

Cheers for the quick response :)

Monsoon117

It'll be in the next few days. I wanted to spend the holidays with my new wife. It's been very refreshing, but it's time to get back into the zone, writing wise.

s476

Any eta on the next Chapter? Not asking for the chapter, just a time frame :) And a happy new year ^^

Joey McGowan

It seems us readers have discovered a new, more malevolent enemy to face....Author-Wife-san, a plague upon rabid readers everywhere.

Code Reed

Who else has read this 10 times hoping the next chapter will be around soon?

Monsoon117

The status is the same as the class.

Pretentious Slime

I remember making this suggesting a long time ago but Rail guns baby. But more magically mind fucking. Maybe having him shoot his singularities out of his dimension with his magic lightning propulsion for easy long distance dick downs. But In all honesty here he could just shoot minute portions of his body at lightning fast speeds and probably do more physical damage. Given that he weighs millions of pounds and a densified piece the size of a marble would roughly weigh a few thousand pounds. All he would have to do is use magic lightning to propel said concentrated piece of his own matter at the enemy. Btw lightning by itself in our atmosphere is about a million times faster then sound. Also a few thousand pound marvel crashing into the earth at that speed would likely wipe out a small country.

Pretentious Slime

Kessiah, should get a bad ass harbingers legion title, like Kessia, the harbingers penance. Or some shit cause she keeps sacrificing her blood and body to save people.

Turora

Love it, consistently great work! Congrats on getting married!

FlawlessMovement

I personally find the crafting to be equal to the combat in this story, and honestly that blows me away. You have someone fighting over a scale of hundreds and thousands of miles and you manage to make BUILDING match. Honestly amazing

Killer Pickle

Funny how that works and its good to see everything going well for you man

David

Daniel has some runes on his body that use some of the mana from the furnace to increase his stats. What was the last chapter that was mentioned? I'm thinking he should drastically increase the amount going to willpower, since his mana and regen is increasing so much. It would not be good for his mana growth to outpace his willpower growth, which it seems to be doing now although he also seems to have a buffer built up so it would not be a problem in the near future.

David

He could ask Schema himself! He now gets a regular meeting with him.

Code Reed

Does he even really have blood anymore? I mean I always got the impression he's now entirely made of that dimension stuff. Sure he may have thing that 'look' like skin and hair, but that shit can probably shrug off a nuke and just be hot for a while. If it was anything it would just be liquid dimension. I mean, does he still have DNA anymore? Can he make little dimension babies of his own?

David

So what is the difference between having the Status of a Sentinel and having the Class of a Sentinel? With the wording I quoted, it makes sense that just having the status without the class means you do not have the responsibilities. But with the other wording, it seems like having the Status is the same as having the Class.

Monsoon117

Will do. I'll have it in the next chapter, along with several other base building elements.

Monsoon117

Her blood is unique, and it would be difficult to recreate. Daniel should definitely put some serious time into making her better gear, and I'll have him invest further into that in the next chapter.

Monsoon117

We'll be going to the beach at some point after she's graduted in may. The ceremony was awesome, and I made quite a few people tear up from my vows. It pays to be a proffesional writer sometimes.

Monsoon117

Thanks for the fix.

Monsoon117

You are both correct. I changed the royal road wording so that it no longer states there is a lack of responsibility. RoyalRoad's chapters are more up to date, and I consider them to be the gold standard for referencing. EDIT: I also changed it for the patreon chapter.

Monsoon117

She's still at work right now, and our honeymoon is scheduled for later. I finish writing several hours before she comes home. We usually spend most of our time together watching tv, movies, reading together, etc. once she gets home. Thank you for the concern though, as it's heartening to hear.

Monsoon117

"My first decree is for all other eldritch to serve me..." <-- That's what it's supposed to be. Thanks for the help.

kfir with a כ

No problem! I love the series and would hate for such mistakes to take someone out of the experience <3

Monsoon117

Oh geez, thanks for the help. That's a pretty funny error to imagine.

Monsoon117

Thanks for the help and fixed.

Monsoon117

Thanks for letting me know, and I got it right on the status at least.

Monsoon117

Thank you for the status analysis. I try to make it perfect each and everytime, but errors slip by. You guys helping me keep everything clear cut is awesome. I should also change the phrasing for Daniel. His Awe stat is unaffected by any perks, so it requires direct investment to increase.

LootGoblin21

I think with all kessiah needs a much better crafted gear set, personally love the crafting chapters for gear. But she has been pivotal and instead of many small boosts Daniel should make her a set that massively helps her with regen and possibly like someone mentioned above maybe using some of his own blood to catalyze a large change in his crafting to imbue even a small portion of his crazy regen onto her.

David

I did not misquote it. I copied and pasted it from chapter 143: https://www.patreon.com/posts/143-free-19437954

Regnal

Yeah that was a lot of crabs...

Alex R

You misquoted it. The Status of a Sentinel(Quest | Tier A+) - By killing a great evil, you've earned the right to ascend. Find the spear and armor of a fallen sentinel and return it to Schema. Rewards: Status updated from sentient to a sentinel. You obtain the benefits of being a sentinel along with their responsibilities. Requirements: Finish the questline Ambassador of Earth. As the text states, he has the responsibilities of a Sentinel which Daniel does not want.

Titaniumtac

Great chapter! Glad to see the overseer, yes I'm pro schema, so sue me.

Joshua Little

True but considering she was looking recked and those other rings seemed to be making crabs for days, it's a suggestion.

Regnal

Unless regeneration is more efficient than converting mana into mass? Although if he really tried I'm sure he could make one really good ring or something other than a whole bunch of them lol.

Regnal

"Rewards: Status updated from sentient to a sentinel. You obtain the benefits of being a sentinel along with their responsibilities." This is the text from chapter 143 so I think your posted quest is worded wrong. It seems that he does acquire their responsibilities as well if he has the status of a sentinel. I don't think He will want to be Schema's puppet. I'm sure he will decline the rewards, unless that quest changed at some point and he doesn't get the responsibility.

Joshua Little

Why is Daniel loading Kessiah up with crappy jewellery. He has crab rings, he can create matter. Put a drop off her blood in a diamond bead and use the enchantment to generate more just like the crabs. Put it on a ring or bangle and she can pour endless blood straight to where it is needed. Thanks for the chapter.

Killer Pickle

Thanks for the chapter and congrats again for getting married man. How was the ceremony and any plans for the honeymoon?

James W

I think it's supposed to be let them live no more eldritch on eldritch violence

David

I'd assume you did not read the text I quoted in the comment.

Alex R

I'd assume it would force Daniel to become a Sentinel and deal with those job responsibilities.

Rielgesh

"Parameter" should probably be perimeter, if you're talking about a defensive line/wall

David

Here's something from chapter 143: "The Status of a Sentinel(Quest | Tier A+) - By killing a great evil, you've earned the right to ascend. Find the spear and armor of a fallen sentinel and return it to Schema. Rewards: Status updated from sentient to a sentinel. You obtain the benefits of being a sentinel, but you lack their responsibilities." I'm wondering if this could allow Daniel to access the Sentinel network that they use to make warp portals.

RainbowBeheader

Love this chapter. But pls be more with your wife that writing this

Lockwood

I mean towering over a 100 foot eldrich while exuding an aura of wrath, gluttony, and war is just a bit more intimidating than only having the aura. Also more Daniel means faster consumption of hybrids right? Could also be like a clone-esk thing with him making multiple bodies all connected with a tether and controlling them with his multiple mind skill. Being in multiple places all at once and such could be useful.

David

Did you read the chapter yet? Daniel is much smaller than the creatures he had to impress. He is also much smaller than Lehesion. And probably smaller than an Old One, although they live in their own dimension so their size may be arbitrary.

Mink

he could, but he's already 17'11", taller than even overseers, Idk what more you could want. a 30-foot person? lmao

David

I wonder if Daniel can use Mass Manipulation, uh, I mean Mass Molder now, in reverse. He usually uses it to make himself smaller (more dense), but could he use it to make himself gigantic (less dense)? That would help when he is trying to impress the natives....

Alex I

"Shitting the Rise of Eden off” I also shit things off. :)

kfir with a כ

Completely right, my bad :D

kfir with a כ

"My first decree is to let all other eldritch. They will serve me" let all the other eldritch what?

David

Actually, it should be "would not" or "wouldn't". I think "would not" conveys the gravity of the statement.

kfir with a כ

"Shitting the Rise of Eden off" probably meant shutting xD

Chase Bauer

That was a great chapter, super excited to see what happens next. Also I'd be lying if I said that I wasn't hyped for when Daniel starts investing in the Immortal tree.

kfir with a כ

hoping it would contain my power-up. Selecting finalize, I figured out quickly it wasn't. Should be "won't

Cirex123

Well, you know the reward for such excellent and quick work? ...exactly!

Kalle

Awesome chapter, Im thinking Daniel should probably ask for a tree guide from Obolis at some point?

Kyle

Amazing chapter! I need to see Daniel do a huge level up in the middle of an enemy base now, imagine the pure carnage!

NightShade

Daniel’s message still has him at level 15000. It’s amazing what you managed to write, even with your wedding having a higher priority.

stellerbattle

great chapter just perfect

David

I notice that every attribute went up except for luck and awe. I guess this is an error, since Daniel says, "As for every other stat, the gains were gradual yet inevitable."

Monsoon117

Well, that chapter came together quickly.


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