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299 A Shining Massacre

🕑 Added 2021-02-17 20:30:01 +0000 UTC

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Jabonought

Just realised that i've got it wrong. its such a part of him now that its silly that im commenting on them as seperate enterties. Plus i'm going "waah a god hit him and he lost an arm, his armor must suck" rather than "a god just hit him and he's not been seperated across the far corners of the universe... nice"

Monsoon117

It depends on how you think about it. Armor's job is to deflect and avoid attacks, but to what end? Survival. If you take out that middle part, Daniel's armor does a damn good job at what it's supposed to do.

Tatsu

i cant tell you since i upgraded to the 5$ tier

Monsoon117

Is it unlocked now?

Tatsu

so is it me or have you kinda forgotten to unlock the latest chapter for the 3$ tier?

Jabonought

The thought just crossed my mind... his armour is kind of rubbish at its job... like intentionally backwards... it never seems to stop attacks, instead making them or healing him up afterwards. its like the healer and the cqc dps while Daniel is the tank and mage

EvilGodAsura

I imagine Daniel's connection to primordial magic is going to be related to his dimension which we still don't fully understand only that things that go in his shield should be in that dimension and are frozen inside of it for some reason.

Damika

Oh this was heart thumping

IAVL

You know rereading Daniel's problem with getting Primordial Mana, I think that he is doing what Torix told him not to do, trying to adapt what others are doing to find his path. While it might work as an example for others, It won't for him. But all others are based on their primordial views of why and how to change their surroundins. But Daniel doesn't have such an instricting connecting to the surrounding dimension anymore. So I think what Daniel needs to do to unlock Primordial Mana is to create his own dimentional material from Mana, since it would not be something naturially created, but more based on the primordial factor of Daniel.

Dominic French

I don't know it makes sense but there's a ton of things that could cause him to have limited time I guess we'll see with the future chapters

Corwin Amber

happy to help :)

Monsoon117

Thanks man. I appreciate it.

Monsoon117

This is the ultimate fix comment. I use control F to swim through these edits, fix them using the easy and transparent reference for fixes, then move on to writing. Thank you so much. This is perfect.

Monsoon117

Thanks man. I always work hard on them and review them more than once. I want it to be cohesive yet emotive. Whether I fully achieved that or not, it's awesome to see people enjoying them.

Turora

Good stuff

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Tyicius

Do you really think an Old One would freely give power? I find that very unlikely.

RB

Nice Job, thanks!

Code Reed

I love how epic you can make these fights.

David

It's odd. Maybe he does not really have his mind back? He is free, but crazy? I don't see why he would be short of time. Unless being free of Elysium means Eonoth is now able to call him away? I just hope Daniel tries to lead Lehesion away from a populated area for the next round. It sounds like Lehesion would certainly follow Daniel now.

Titaniumtac

well done

Corwin Amber

'conscious controlling' -> 'conscious mind controlling' 'offensive conscious acted' -> 'offensive conscious mind acted' 'dawned on me' 'dawned' <- I think this words needs to be changed/corrected 'crushed lehesion's left arm' lehesion -> Lehesion 'force to leveled buildings' leveled -> level

Kemizle

I’m wondering if his city will survive this...also hoping his ppl( including the vagni) got evacuated

s476

Sweet

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

kyle

Awesome! Mooooore pls!

David C

Your fight scenes are always fantastic.

Terrodin

great work =) more plz

Dominic French

It's weird, Lehesion seems to think he will die or something soon, he says I no longer have time.

Alex R

Same thing happened with Gabriel, the chains that binded were destroyed and the monster because significantly stronger.

Dominic French

Oof I don't what way this is going, I'm pretty sure Daniel will survive but the planet I don't know

Monsoon117

Oh man, the moment I posted this chapter I remembered a note to incorporate Helios more into the intial parts of the fight. I'll be adding that over the next few minutes, but I'm sure I'll get a few comments later from people reading the emails of the chapter. Those don't update like the actual web page does. Either way, enjoy guys.


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