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305 A Galaxy Unexplored

🕑 Added 2021-03-18 19:57:54 +0000 UTC

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Turora

Yeah that was a gem for sure! Everyone’s just like, “Uh, I don’t think that counts.”

Monsoon117

My favorite part is when Daniel surrenders and immediately Hod starts bragging about his victory.

Turora

Always a treat. Hod being Hod is too fun.

EvilGodAsura

Just want to help bud. I'll never tell you what to do just giving my honest thoughts to hopefully help!

Monsoon117

Ok, that makes a lot sense, actually. I misunderstood that part of what you were saying, and that's a really good point. I can have Daniel discuss the issues he has personally with Obolis before the end of this party, and that would flow very well with what I already have planned. Ah man, I'm beggining to think of the discussion and its details already. Thanks for always putting the time in to voice your thoughts, even if we don't always agree. Times like this are were they can really help out the story. Really, I appreciate it.

EvilGodAsura

I'm not saying Daniel needs to punch everyone in the face that does something he does not like. I'm saying that he keeps making compromises with others that do things he disagrees with. Schema I get now fair enough. Elysium I get because fair enough endless war sounds dangerous long term. But he can't even muster the courage to tell Obolis privately about his concerns with the whole slavery thing? He is letting that go purely because of greed and desire for benefits. The hard work of acting out what he believes would be confronting Obolis and making it clear that he won't work with someone that does those things. At what point does the justification for what is best for his guild meet his own personal morals. At this rate it seems he will ignore anything evil someone does as long as he gets more wealth and power for his guild. If he can protect his guild I'm afraid he will happily just turtle up on a few plantets forever and not fight for anything beyond clearing a few fringe worlds.

Monsoon117

My reasoning was that it's different to hear something is happening versus seeing it happening. It's like knowing there are starving children in Africa. I know this, yet I haven't donated most of my income to fix that problem despite knowing it exists. If I saw a starving child on the road, however, it would change my perspective quite a bit.

Monsoon117

I guess my main disconnect here is seeing comments mentioning that Daniel should stand up for what he thinks is right. To me, there's many ways to do that. You can try to uphold those morals in a conversation or argument, but that doesn't change anything long term. Doing the hard work of acting out what you beleive in, now that's enacting real change. Daniel's in the position to do that.

Monsoon117

But the thing is, Daniel didn't betray Schema. Schema didn't have a personal agreement with Daniel that he must complete this war. Daniel also never backstabbed Schema and joined Elysium. Daniel was roped into the war, and Schema went silent. Daniel agreed to stop attacking Elysium. He isn't fighting for Elysium. That would be betrayal. Just as well, Daniel is still supporting Schema's cause, just on the side lines. As for standing up for his ideals, that's an arguable case either way. Daniel could've taken a hard stance in the moment against both Elysium and the Empire. If he did that, he'd still be fighting Elysium and he'd of lost the deal with the Empire. Sure, he'd feel good about himself for not letting them do things in his presence that bothered him. At the same, he'd of eliminated any opportunity for him to make meaningful changes in his own guild because he'd be stuck fighting all the time. Now he can set up worlds he owns as he sees fit instead of arguing with people he can't convince. That's a way of acting out his morals in a different way; every planet he sets up that's free is one less enslaved planet either way.

EvilGodAsura

Daniel can confront schema and threaten a sentinel with violence but he can't tell Obolis about his worries on him using slavery? Is he picking and choosing his morals as it suits him constantly now? First elysium can be bargained with even if they commit horrific atrocities with hybrids. Now Obolis is not even questioned on his slavery because Daniel wants benefits. Where does it end? At what point does Daniel feel safe and secure enough that he can actually stand up for what he believes is wrong and take risks? He only betrayed schema because he's not afraid of losing the system or it's power. But when he is faced with someone much weaker that has something he wants compromise is ok. Does anyone else see the issue here with him getting frustrated over schema not being as helpful as he wants so he betrays it. But when he is faced with things that I would hope deeply bother him he is willing to let it slide for as long as he can to get as much Benifit as possible? I would expect this behavior from Torix not Daniel. Then again maybe I'm blind again so who knows maybe I'm just crazy for seeing something off here.

Titaniumtac

"I shook off the feeling to retort, 'Your leadership isn't much better.' Rolling my shoulders." I suppose I want him to respect Obolis a bit, not everyones perfect, Obolis has even been shown to regret what he did because his passion was elsewhere. Dont change anything on my account Daniel has a very real reaction to this New World governing policies.

Monsoon117

What about Daniel's reaction is off-putting exactly? Not trying to press an issue, just understand more precisely what you mean.

Nopkar

one of my all time favorite tropes in any medium is the reunion of a mc and someone they've met earlier on their journeys and now get to show off their progress. I'm more than excited for this reaction omg

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Shin

So far they are an interesting bunch especialy the naming convention i am very interested in the younger ones and if Daniel can incorporate some in his own guild

Gabe

Great chapter! For some reason I found Daniel more relaxed at this party than in past social gatherings. I enjoyed it more because of it. Could be seen as growth in this area for the big man? Especially enjoyed the mental image of Daniel standing before a rainbow of multi-shaped blobs!

Titaniumtac

Glad to see tera and the slime culture expanding the universe. A little put off how Daniel treats Obolis now, it does make sense as Daniel is young and doesnt understand standard galactic governing. We need some use of Schema checking couldnt Tera see exactly who he is, and bio information??? Great way to end my work week btw !!!

Monsoon117

Thanks a lot. I'll keep working hard to make sure your pledge doesn't go to waste.

Monsoon117

That's what I meant it to be, but after rereading that part, it definitely doesn't come across like that. I'll give it a tweak, and thanks for the suggestion.

See chapter 93.

Felipe Andrade

I don’t remember who Tera is either, not very good memory

Connor M.

Hey, just wanted to day that I've really appreciated the steady pace of chapter releases recently its been pretty nice. To show some of that appreciation I've decided to double my pledge for the month. Keep up the good writing😁, looking forward to the next chapter.

Alex I

The one who brought Daniel back into the system after he completed his first cipher rune.

Qrystof

Gave him the vial of super nasty miasma to evolve his armor and also was the one who let him back into the system after his first attempt at the cipher. At least that's who I remember.

Isn't Tera's reaction a little off? He does not know who Harbinger is? I can see him not realizing that it is the little Daniel that he met so long ago, but then his reaction should not be "Who are you?" but rather "I do not believe we have met, Harbinger".

Corwin Amber

'Have you after barreling after them' -> 'Have you barreling after them'

Alex Hignett

Who was Tera again?

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

Tyicius

With this new chapter, my day has now peaked.

Gardor

Yeah but you'd recognize the Harbinger of Cataclysm at his own party.

Titaniumtac

Yah! thx for the chapter

Alex R

Yeah it's like seeing someone as a 10 year old and then later seeing them as a 28 year old. The difference in appearance would be huge.

Tomisgoofy

To be fair to Tera I wouldn't recognize him either

Monsoon117

My transparency comment is a bit late today, but I got caught up talking with someone on discord. Anywho, trying to flesh out the ahcorus and give them character, culture, etc. This is just the start of that, but hopefully it's a reasonable beggining to what I mentioned. Let me know what you think, thoughts, suggestions, any of that would be awesome. Enjoy guys.

Lockwood

Hell yeah

Kryn

Perfect timing, going finish this tractor repair then take an extra long lunch to savor the chapter.

Steven Myers

Nice

Kurt A

Nice


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