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311 A Clever Bug

🕑 Added 2021-04-09 16:26:00 +0000 UTC

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Pretentious Slime

Hey monsoon. I love your story. Also I’m hoping life is getting you down and not the comments cause at least with life you can be a stoic. Other people’s opinions are 100% subjective especially if you’re writing the story. So, idk, if people are getting you down. You are the creator. The one above all. Be the pillar of the press. Keep writing. Stay triumphant.

isaiah mccoy

I really appreciate the slower points of the story, the crafting & gaming his skills to get stronger

Senio Holland

Worth noting that while sound travels faster in denser materials, it does not travel as far, As the kinetic energy is converted quicker (more atoms to move takes more energy, newtons 1st law.)

EvilGodAsura

Your talent for writing realistic characters and your imagery is truly astounding. The sheer quality is why I put this up with some of the top rated light novels out there already.

EvilGodAsura

I get the difficulty for sure no need to take it to heart. Seeing the kind of person Daniel is I don't imagine it would impact him all that much actually. He would probably look at something. A mind would instantly absorb and process the info into what it deems of interest and give it to his main mind to react to. In all he would probably just react to and learn everything much faster but the character you've made has such a stable build and personality I trust he could handle it if you wanted in his normal brute force way. 😉

Monsoon117

Let's think about those implications - for starters, if Daniel can simply absorb all the info he looks at, he won't be Daniel anymore. He'll basically turn into someone else entirely. That kind of shift in his character coming from an ability, and so quickly as well, would be very offputting. Even if someone if given a promotion or gets hired at a new firm, they don't change their identity over night. It sinks in over time. I'm doing that here.

Monsoon117

Hop on the new world discord. I talk there sometimes.

Monsoon117

This is a huge compliment. Thank you.

Monsoon117

I think what you're feeling is more so from Daniel than his team. He's ever so slightly too smug this chapter. I toned it tone by a fraction, and I think his interactions come across better because of it.

EvilGodAsura

Not a complaint just seems like it would be more fitting to say he learned everything with ease to show off his new mental prowess since it still sounds like something he would have said before the upgrade.

Monsoon117

He's surprised that there's that much information from a simple status reading. That's really what it amounts to. It's not a deterministic tell on his net intelligence or anything.

EvilGodAsura

Overwhelmed? I thought one of his Minds summarized everything for him automatically. Also if his processing power is up to it and he has photographic memory he should be able to take in and digest a full Wikipedia worth of info near instantly with his stats right?

Monsoon117

It's not literal. It's an expression for feeling overwhelmed.

EvilGodAsura

Great chapter. How does the status info still give him a headache? I thought that mana mind thing gave him massive amounts of raw processing power.

Regnal

Yeah he could become a hive mind with manifold mind and use his golems to house those consciousnesses.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Anton Remizov

Nice one. Love it. I really like the multithreaded mind theme. it is a game-changer. I was also curious if Daniel can so easily modify his body, could he grow one more eye, or something like that? BTW, PM me when you have some time. Was looking to chat with you for a while :)

FlawlessMovement

You have a gift I've seen very few other places. It’s odd how you make a world breaker mage seem so...realistic? It seems like EXACTLY what people would do and react. Just weird

Age Rich

I’m not sure that’s the case. Just a chapter or two ago he was having a crisis of confidence. It took a frontline character without a name in story to remind him…that while he’s made mistakes and made hard choices, it was better than the alternative. Not perfect or even good, but better.

Steven Vollmert

I think we have to look at who is currently with him. Florence is only in this position because Daniel gave him a chance noone else gave him until now. Amara literally fears him to death and he is the only protection she has from being killed by almost anyone they meet. And our resident portaling specialist has literally seen the growth in Daniels might over the past few weeks. And as a very capable mage, who also uses an arcane furnace he very well knows how insane the things Dnaiel does are. And we have to remember, that a lost has hapend in a very, very short time frame. So it may seem like he gets many compliments, but the truce is like a day or two old at this point.

LordDark

So my main critique at this point is that it is starting to feel like everyone including daniel is stroking daniels ego in any and every conversation. Once in a while would be fine but now he is just starting to feel arrogant and his highly capable guild mates act like doormats.

Pixelblade

The description of what it was like was my favourite part this chapter. I'd like to see Daniel do more stuff like this. He could go swimming in the heart of a star or see how close he could get to a black hole.

Code Reed

I'd be interested in Daniel becoming some sort of Sudo-Hivemind. Reminds me of Rock and Morty. For the most part, all the Ricks look, act, think like Ricks. Splitting of sections of himself to make lesser versions of himself powered by reverse engineered Elemental Furnaces could be similar to Schemes lesser AI's. But would a Daniel like that still grow as a person? Would they stop being the same person after enough time? And would the copies not appreciate being copies? Could be interesting.

Code Reed

I love how taking a dip in the Earth's mantle is just a leisure activity to him at this point. Intellectually I knew he could walk on the sun of he wanted, but the idea of him going for a casual swim in the Earth's core, as a relaxing activity, is more visceral than I expected it to be.

Kevin M

Tyicius covered it pretty well. Denser materials allow for faster travel of sound, and the higher temperature means the molecules are moving faster so sound is transferred faster. Typically the magma in the mantle is not perfectly uniform though so it would cause variance in how fast sound will travel depending on its direction and distance.

Tyicius

Sound waves travel faster in denser substances because neighboring particles will more easily bump into one another. ... Thus sound waves travel much faster in water than they do in air. In freshwater at room temperature, for example, sound travels about 4.3 times faster than it does in air at the same temperature. Taken from google.

Monsoon117

Why would sound carry better? Just knowledge for future references.

s476

I love how far daniel has come with magic, from the elevator to the platform. I especially love Helios reactions about it. Looking forward to their talk next chapter! Thanks for htis one

Kemizle

This seems like something Daniel could use to learn primordial mana...taking a small piece of his mind and stick it in mana. He might be able to reprogram that part for different stuff

Hi I noticed a small error when you described Reason's movement, I think you meant gait not gate.

Kevin M

Small point, that I only mention because you are always so consistent with this stuff. Sound would actually carry much better in magma then air or water. I loved the chapter though and am seriously enjoying finally getting to see another Rhul.

kyle

Loving it, thanks!

Monsoon117

I've edited 3 chapters, so not much to go on right now. EDIT: Now its 4 baby, I'm on a roll.

Lockwood

Woooh another reason to reread! Time for round 4!

Monsoon117

These have been fun chapters to write lately. I'm still editing the earlier parts of the New World, and that's why I haven't released as much content as I otherwise would. That being said, I'm updating Royal Road with the edited chapters, and there will be subtle changes in the story. These will mainly be differences in how characters developed, plot holes being sealed up, and prose/grammar edits. That's pretty much the most consistent con I get from reviewers at this point - my grammar. It's definitely a loose end that's easily tied as I can just get an editor, but for now, I'm just developing what's always been essentially a rough draft. There's probably less errors in it after a nice pruning, so maybe you guys can re-read as I go. You could always wait until after I've released a bunch of them as well.

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

Lockwood

Sweet!


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