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🕑 Added 2021-09-21 20:56:23 +0000 UTC

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Brisingaer

This was awesome. Straight up. Actually I've been shrinking myself this whole time is such a flex. It's nuts. I love it. Gives off. " All this time. I've been playing human" vibes.

Kyle

Chapter 127 its that neither of them will kill the other until the requirements of the contract are fulfilled. The contract is “Dimension-C138 will reprogram Schema as he sees fit within the next thousand years. Otherwise, Dimension-C138 will be disintegrated.” it could be something as small as giving a few year notice before the tutorial.

RB

I don't know that it was ever confirmed as lethal. I remember Yawm said something about dealing with the consequences when he decided to kill Daniel, and he was still making plans for after that, so he must have thought he could survive them.

RB

It's true that some writers can be unnecessarily wordy, or verbose, and that this can take away from the focus or pace of the story, but I don't think you have anything to worry about. if anything, your edits have gone a long way to addressing a lack of flow and depth that your earlier work had. Thanks for the continued chapters and I look forward to reading future edits:)

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Numan

Daniel has to edit schema core code on a time frame, i don't remember how much time he has, 100 or 1000 years. If he doesn't comply the contract, he dies

Anthony Romanov

I have a question: What is Yawn's contract with Daniel? I forgot.

Anthony Romanov

I like my Lllooonnnnngggg chapters 😌

Monsoon117

He's reaching up, not just sticking a hand out. I'll make that more clear.

alexander julian

The platform, he knelt at one point and everyone in the guild height is also increased by legacies and rings and their own builds. Their not normal heights either

Varzifar

Actually, I've shrinking myself this entire time -> Actually, I've been shrinking myself this entire time.

Titaniumtac

"know will be the time to say it." ----> now will be the time to say it.

kyle

Wasn't there a raised platform?

Gardor

Isnt Daniel fifteen feet tall even when shrunk? How tall is Florence to be able to casually rest his hand on Daniels shoulders a couple times in this chapter?

drag0nreb0rn

Good thing daniels weapon is ....dem hands son.. pugilist for the win.

Paradox Grim

Oh damn letting his full size come into play for the meeting, absolute titan :D

Sebas Tian

No weapons? Honestly I can't think of any weapon Daniel has that isn't overshadowed by his mere existence lol.

Callum

love it

Sam4005

No its ok, he can go in details ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Jitay Renia

I fucking love Hod, and Daniel deserves his dues, that section of the chap got me emosh

Tyicius

If people didn't enjoy your story they wouldn't be giving you money to support your writing. The same applies to me. Person who wrote that review is either an idiot or trolling. Well you should be careful not to fall into an echo chamber of support from your most devoted fans but we can be some of the most critical because we're so invested. Bottom line: I'm not unsubscribing anytime soon.

Dominic Pernicone

I really really enjoy the recent confidence you've been writing into Daniel. It's been a long time coming, and I'm eager to see how he stands among other Sovereigns.

zalex

If there's something you don't like, know will be the time to say it. shouldn't it be 'now will be the time to say it.' and not know

zalex

you know, I was so expecting an althea (or a hod) 'growth' joke. the one for althea would be one involving bed antics. the one for hod would be him saying he can do that too. Just daniel does it a little bit better.

Kemizle

Schema’s up to something😅

zoli bassoff

Enjoying the story as it is unfolding. Thank you for the fun.

Connor Alexander

Great chapter! And an edit: No, I'm diving into more detail about that. -> No, I’m not diving into more detail about that.

Cody

Thank you brotha, can't wait for more

Jon Lomax

thanks for the chapter and story. one of my favourites, ever... the problem sometimes with just releasing chapters, is that people just want more. which is good and bad. but it can leave readers upset when they can see a story line coming, but are not there yet. keep writing as you are, it's great and getting better..

Xepen

Just ignore those that complain about word count, they’re probably not all that invested and not that willing to be invested in the story if they’re complaining about it being too long.

scroogie

I need more pls

s476

I like big man big

Deltoren

Actually, I've shrinking ->Actually, I've been shrinking

Guigz

So enjoyable ! I really love your work

Potation

I can't wait! I know that I have already asked, but could we get Daniel's skills, and/or possible skills to gain?

Titaniumtac

Good man

Monsoon117

Hey, long time no see guys. This was the easiest, funnest 3,500 word chapter I've every written. I can't think of another time where I enjoyed the process this much. I genuinely expected the process of making the story to get harder as I went, but I've found it to be the exact opposite. This schedule is making it so much easier. I'm more invested in the narrative, I have a better feel for characters. I'm enjoying the process, even the editing is going well because I enjoy it. As for the edting, one dissapointing aspect was actually the ratings of my story. They dropped instead of increasing. I had a recent review give me a low rating because, get this guys, 'There's too much text.' I was like, 'It's a book, what the hell?' Anyways, I don't take reviews like that to heart, especially not anymore. That one was particularly crazy though. Either way, I hope you all enjoy this chapter, and that you're looking forward to the council meeting. It's going to be spicy.


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