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333 Leviathan-7

🕑 Added 2021-10-07 22:07:11 +0000 UTC

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Jamie Trevino

Um, I don’t know if you’ll see this but the chapters between this and 325 are missing/inaccessible to me, is that normal?

Stepan Kadlec

Thanks for the chapters. I am glad I did not stop my support - it was worth the wait :)

FlawlessMovement

Atleast he can collect ambient mana and passively increase his strength with the cipher so it doesn’t change his advancement too much

Monsoon117

Then the chapter's composition is what helped it the most. That's good to know, as that was intentional.

Monsoon117

Yeah. it's an absolute hellhole. There's no possible way for a standard citizen to survive on this planet. It really is the definition of an alien world.

Anthony Romanov

You know that Schema rates artifacts so it can make anyone it want to have top 10 and get all heavyweights under "bad luck" be its soldiers. So Schema gets its warriors , kills off weaker ones and gets priceless artifacts and without spending any levels on them since it has no connection (rulers can kill all they want but they won't earn any level from fighting). It more of Lottery of who survives for 3 months.

Zachary Smith

So cool!

SquidTheJim

When I get a lot of visual information all at once I tend to go "welp, I'm going to forget half of this" and then hope that if it's important there'll be a reminder. The way you kept tying in new visuals with the recurring idea of the kelp in the sky really helped imo. This chapter didn't feel like an "information overload" situation.

Lawless

Damn, I’m waiting for Daniel to take notes on Leviathan and make massive singularities like that.

jordan

Hmmm, so Daniel's plan is to build a base and create a bunch of supergolems to go out and collect artifacts to turn in to Schema so he can place in the top 10 and avoid fighting Schema's war long enough for him to finish fortifying Earth and secede from Schema? At first I thought he was going to make a city on Leviathan-7 but it sounds too inhospitable for anyone but Daniel and his supergolems. I suppose the base could be his personal research lab and factory to use even after the Lottery is over, so he can build his Primordial creations without Schema interference, and with an extremely favorable time-ratio relative to Earth. Assuming he can find a way to travel between Earth and Leviathan-7 without raising suspicion.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Blake Richardson

Thanks for the chapter

K

The whole planet's environment is really nice and made me imagine things I've never thought of before! Always refreshing when you create things for us, even if they're imaginary. Thanks Monsoon.

Anthony Romanov

This planet is Daniel's all-you-can-eat buffet 😋 as food just dropping from the sky. Cloudy with a chance of Beef Eldrich sandwich 🥪.

Brent Thomas

This hands down one of your best chapters. Daniel is a beast.

Marius Giurgila

Even though my mind was tired from work I still could digest the description of the planet.

Connor Alexander

Holy shit I love the imagery of this world, it functions like a parody of a normal ecosystem, with plants harvesting up black hole juice instead of sun juice, and just outright making monsters instead of feeding them, it feels so perfectly eldritch. Also did you get inspiration for the first part from Netflix’s Alien Worlds? Can’t wait to see how this progresses!

Xepen

And so it begins.

Alex I

To mirror a previous comment. Thanks for the improved descriptive chapter, nerd! For real though, thanks for the extra effort to improve on even the little things to make our reading experience better.

Alex R

Thanks for the good chapter

Monsoon117

So this chapter is one I'm really proud of, and I'll detail why. For starters, it really shows off a lot of imagination. That's something I've always thrived on and never struggled with. However, this chapter is sort of a balancing act when compared to my other 'introductory' chapters. What do I mean by that? Well, I remember posting the Giess description chapter, and it was well recieved. However, some people mentioned how the chapter demanded too much visualization. I didn't know what to think of that comment, but I kept thinking about it before having a eureka moment. It was too dense. That's a totally sensical complaint. After all, the sheer amount of information described in these chapters makes them reference chapters for me. For this one, I intersparsed action between the descriptions to break it up into more digestible chunks. It also makes each piece of information more relevant. I also went for tapering the information into a more gradual build-up. Describing the last section of this chapter would've been overwhelming if I did it at the start of the chapter. By steadily showing a progression, the outright insane ideas become far more cohesive. So this is my attempts at incorporating those ideas into my work. Let me know what you all think.

the void

Thanks for the chapter nerd!


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