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416 An Everchanging Life

🕑 Added 2025-03-30 00:58:57 +0000 UTC

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Napalm078

Mmm, Terra the terraformer

Just Dave

Not saying life would be easy, but...venus?

Monsoon117

Fight scenes always came to me naturally. I've sharpened the sword, but it always seemed like a strength. Other aspects of my writing have needed work for a longtime, eg, the character moments. I've worked hard to round out that aspect of my writing by making them more impactful, meaningful, and sincere. It's a nice skill to give the fights, numbers, and crazy worldbuilding meaning. Eventually, it all blurs together if you don't have real characters and peace to ground it all and keep it centered.

the void

Thank you for the chapter! Keep Quinn safe, named minor side characters are in grave danger lol

FlawlessMovement

I love seeing him interact with others in a more peaceful or building setting. Your fight scenes are the best I know but your non combat scenes can literally bring a tear to my eye. And it’s interesting to see him walk as basically a god among mortals.

Monsoon117

Fun, fun ,fun. I liked writing this quite a bit, and editing wasn't too bad either. I hope you all enjoyed.


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