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422 A Chase Across Cosmos

🕑 Added 2025-04-13 05:23:24 +0000 UTC

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drag0nreb0rn

Fire

Zachary Smith

I’m happy to see you again my friend. I’m happy to be supporting your Patreon. It’s been a journey.

Atlas Dwarf

I am more surprised she thought nukes would work if she did her research. The Yawm fight where he was tossing around mini-nukes was recorded and broadcasted. Daniel even took one point blank for his Guild and survived even back then. There was also that mini-nuke assassination attempt not long after the Yawm fight which I would imagine the information on that would at least be somewhat findable.

Killer Pickle

Yeah… ehh

Monsoon117

The idea of exposing weakpoints against a less combat able foe was the plan. It hasn't panned out as I hoped, though I think there's still good parts in the chapter as a whole. I'll be going over the two chapters over today and tommorrow to really iron out and come up with some plans to solve the weird feel of the chapters.

Felipe Andrade

I’m finding this Marcella arc a bit painful. Mostly dialogues where he’s impotently jerked around. But putting his weakness on paper was interesting, it’s something I’ve thought before.

EsZeus

Weird chapter, to be honest. It can be summarized in talks. Trapped in dungeons. Illusions. Talk. Back to the beginning. Fight now next chapter.

Wrath

Yeah, our boy's gonna show them the meaning of the word monster and unstoppable. I'm almost surprised that he's not gonna show them the full force of his guild and power.

Rocky

so did she not realize Daniel willing disintegrates himself as an attack in all her research? Karma is gonna hit her with a mean right hook real soon.

Monsoon117

Sorry for the late post. This chapter had to be the hardest chapter to edit I've ever written. For some reason or the other, the quality of the writing here was just abyssmal. I tried to salvage it, but I ended up wasting a bunch of time before having to rewrite everything. In the end, I'm certain here's some parts that are still way off, but I've parsed over it so many times that the obvious mistakes aren't so obvious to me anymore. Anyways, sorry for the delay guys.


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