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433 Honesty

🕑 Added 2025-05-09 06:52:31 +0000 UTC

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SaintMaceToTheFace

I am floored by how good your writing has become over the years. I love how you are adding this perspective and world building

Monsoon117

I'll do some research to understand the nuance. Thanks for pointing out the issue.

Killer Pickle

You have a habit of making a grammar mistake when referring gravity - it’s not gravitation particularly in the contexts 99% of the time in the story it’s just gravity. By definition they’re almost identical, gravitation is normally used in relation to a gravitational force while gravity is the phenomena. But for instance when you say Danial manipulates gravitation it should be gravity as he is referring to the concept. Yeah so pretty much you just need to switch it over (should probably do that for the entire story lol ctrl + F search)

Illue

The point is that they’re becoming too reliant on him for every little thing. He wants them to learn how to take care of themselves since he’s not always around and can’t be in more than one place. Hell, in the cavern we saw how squishy they were when they were running from Eldritch over a thousand levels lower than them.

Asendon121

I'm always looking forward to the next chapter and am never disappointed, I really loved to slow reveal at the end and can't wait to see where this conversation, and his guild grows from this arc.

FlawlessMovement

Kind of sad that he’s using the limited method. I had hope he would attempt to put a ring on every single humans hand. Not limit who has them even further.

EsZeus

Nice. Now we need more. Screw sleep. No one needs that.

Reps A

Thanks for the chapter

Rocky

i mean im awake for these releases so i cant exactly complain about your sleep schedule. dont wanna be a hypocrite. Great chapter.

Monsoon117

Listen guys, the sleep schedule has hit critical mass. I've got to reign this beast in. Anyways, I hope you all enjoy the chapter, and I had a blast writing this one. It was so much fun. I've actually rekindled a lot of my passion for writing recently, not that it ever fully faded. It's just great to actually produce rather than refine. Either way, I hope you all enjoy.


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