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441 Monster and Machine

🕑 Added 2025-05-27 23:21:13 +0000 UTC

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Etez

Thx for the chapter, last sentence from Plagia made me lose my shit xD

Really_Big

“A roar does nothing. It’s only a declaration. It carries meaning but lacks substance. Anger is the same. It spurs those who lack the will and conviction to motivate themselves beyond simple, emotional triggers. For me, I can make myself act. It’s actually my preferred language. In time, my actions will speak so loudly that I won’t need anger or roars or declarations. Everyone will know exactly what I never said aloud, even those that haven’t heard my voice or felt my rage.” I raised my brow. “And that's because words are undone in moments. Actions echo.” Chills, this is one of the hardest lines I've ever read. Awesome stuff.

Monsoon117

Thanks and fixed.

Napalm078

"It's an austere assumption that Elysium will let us clean this carnage after we culled their forces." I'm fairly certain that's not the correct usage of austere. "Seeing Plazia put the Overseer in a sour mood instantly. Plazia murmured." *instantly. Plazia murmured, "Aside from that, why would the Old One's give away their energy for free?" *would the Old Ones give away their

Crisp Ratt

Thanks for the chapter

Michał Kruk

Greatly enjoying your comeback so far, keep it going my man !

starvires

I love the chapter, but I just have to say this “Nickelodeon will find you!”😆

Monsoon117

This was a fun chapter to write. I always enjoy dialogue between divergent, conflicted characters, and this was a great example of that. I hope you all liked it.


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