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443 Finding a Path

🕑 Added 2025-06-01 05:12:11 +0000 UTC

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Etez

Wtf the end xDDDD

Monsoon117

Thanks and fixed. I think whenever is used properly there, but it's actually misused two other times in the chapter. In the case you brought up, it's a discussion on underlying principles that consistently cause an outcome. Whenever makes sense in that context, imo.

Monsoon117

I put that part in to demonstrate how different their backgrounds are. Helios was raised in an empire and educated on leadership from a young age. He's been tested many times in many positions, and he has decades of experience. Daniel is a highschool dropout who's been thrust into a position where he's ruling a huge empire. Daniel's learning, but yes, he has a ton he could pick up from Helios about how to manage people and organizations.

Chibrahim

Thx God Helios is on their team. Also, Daniel should rent his golem armada for stuff like thé Terraforming. Everyone and their dog would bé ready to do anything for some of his equipement or 1 hour of his time purging a Battlefield. He shouldnt lose his time doing menial work, he need to grow up and step up as a leader. He should have Helios being around him more often so the Big Kitty teach him how to lead

Wrath

I feel like this is an impressively long chapter. Well done i'm impressed.

Napalm078

"In essence, we are tools for the Old One's amusement, and they wish to break that cycle." *for the Old Ones' amusement, and they "However, in our situation, it presents a startling opportunity - we can further filter our mana until it lacks the Old One's harmful influence." *lacks the Old Ones' harmful influence. "Pointless dribble. How would we uncover the validity of this information, and who will be the tortured people to unravel the Old One's secrets?" *Pointless drivel. How would we *unravel the Old Ones' secrets? "Whenever you dictate strength and influence on the ability to kill monsters, the most violent individuals rise to prominence." *When you dictate strength -the intent is more clear this way

Monsoon117

He steadily regained his memories as he healed from the wounds after Marcella was eliminated. It was during the arc where he hung out with Nissa, Jamal, Joshua, and Jasmine in Springfield.

Jesse B.

I thought he couldnt remember Cygna the Silent's name? Or was that a different being? Or did he somehow remember in a previous chapter and i forgot?

LolGamez

Hahahaha lovely ending

Monsoon117

This was a fun chapter to write out. Long, but dialogue sections have become a lot easier to manage over the years. Either way, I hope you all enjoyed.


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