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Book 2 | 3 A Forgotten City

🕑 Added 2025-06-06 19:52:26 +0000 UTC

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Monsoon117

It's good you noticed a few of the key changes. The next scenes will be altered as well, though probably more so than this chapter.

Napalm078

There are some spoilers in this comment for later chapters of The New World. In case some people reading this chapter haven't made it too far, I have put this warning. The warning is what has been written above. You have been warned. Unless you didn't read any of this, in which case I'm not sure what you're doing. Good 'ol oppression. ""Delicious. As where the others."" *"Delicious. As were the others." Imagine not having fists the density of strange matter Suplex :D 'last uninjured elbow.', like he had more than two ooo~, Daniel definitely felt more guilty in this fight, Kessiah was more mature, and charisma was definitely more heavily emphasized here. Okay, a reintroduction of stats with examples, nice. Oh? And a verification of 1000 stat perks? Imagine having to break your skintight armor because of sixty points in constitution. It really puts into perspective how ENOUMOUSLY OVERPOWERED his legacies are. Well, an S tier legacy with double digits of +s for it has gotta do something. I forgot how poor Daniel used to be in stats 'There was bound to come a point where gaining levels would become tremendously arduous' uhh. yeah... "She fired her rifle at interspersed intervals, each shot piercing the vital of whatever creature she sniped." *shot piercing the vitals of whatever creature -vital by itself as referring to the most important thing(s) a creature needs to survive has always had an s in my reading experience. "Despite the peril, a routine set in overtime." *peril, a routine was set in overtime. Perhaps also/or a space between the words composing overtime. Mmmm, yay. Quite the scenic location, Springfield. Oh! A slight introduction/foreshadowing to the place he hid in! Honestly, it has been a while since I read back here, but this kinda stuff feels new to me, at least. Woot woot. It's a nice perspective looking back at such a while ago for Daniel :).

Jesse B.

Fuckin OOF, man thats rough.

Monsoon117

Guys, I had to redo the status from scratch because my save files overwrote and deleted previous, solid versions of the status. They also saved over my one drive files from Microsoft, and so, I have had to go back and redo every level, dungeon core, and tree augment. Good news, I'm up to date on all the status aspects of the story. Yay...


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