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447 Colonizing a World

🕑 Added 2025-06-11 00:08:07 +0000 UTC

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Truck69kun

Oh no...

Napalm078

"Ah, excellent. It sounds like I'm the local power grid then." *local power gird, then. "It's astonishing how much the Vagni accomplished whenever one peers beneath their eldritchian surfaces." *the Vagni accomplished when one peers beneath -Makes it sound more allegorical "If we view the situation from that lens, then a lot of disparate aspects of the system begin to come together holistically speaking." *to come together, holistically speaking. "Gialgathens flew in the rich skies of the world with other eltari, the two races playing games together above the endless seas." *the world with the Eltari, the two races "Plazia floated down before I took a moment to breath." *a moment to breathe. "Now I recall mentioning you would regret what you did to me." *Now, I recall mentioning that you would regret what you did to me.

Xepen

Awesome 😁

the void

Daniel is gonna get thrown into space one of these days and just take the time to build a planet form his wake and flesh

Robert Downing

Yo I think Schema is an agent of the old ones, and in a Shal like situation. Don’t know how much of a hot take that is tbh, but just had that thought reading this chapter.

Monsoon117

So folks, I changed the last status update on the previous chapter. It was butchered beyond belief, and that was entirely my bad. Excel has been saving over my previous files and getting them mixed up via autosaving. At this point, I might transfer over to Google Sheets since it's been so painful to fix at both points of the story I'm working on. Either way, this chapter was pretty fun to write, and I hope you all enjoy it.


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