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Dao of Healing - Chapter 33

🕑 Added 2025-01-08 21:41:28 +0000 UTC

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EsZeus

I understand what you tried to do here. But as a character, he is kinda spineless and it repeated too many times in a row, in the same scene. Even the ending was yet another cliche and again (!) the same reaction of the other cultivator. I mean, everybody just jumps at "demonic cultivator!" And the MC "Ohhh, sorry! No, no, let me explain! Please!" That's all of my criticism. I am fine with him finding purpose and getting more into what and why it works for him with his blood essence.

Ariana Q

I’m sorry you feel this way. This arc was meant to help develop his views towards being more decisive and by the next few chapters he will be a little more in control of his fate. I appreciate you giving the critique nonetheless.

EsZeus

I am sloooowlyyy getting sick of the MC being so submissive. In this scenario it happened multiple times already. It's... Repetitive and boring. And not very rational/logical anymore. The first time. Ok. But by now he SHOULD be getting angry. Or whatever. But no one repeats himself that many times in the same scene. Feedback

dani

Can anyone beat the idiot


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