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Chapter 258

🕑 Added 2022-10-05 06:43:57 +0000 UTC

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Jason Wu

I wanna see Rin in Remnant. Rin X Weiss. They will Tsundere each other in a huge circle jerk

Darin Ehrhart

Meh, it's fine. Like I said, your story. I get what you are saying, it just came across as "This is bad and you should feel bad for it" instead of "I know this is how its been up till now, but lets change." At least to me.

AStoryForOne

It's because they found a dynamic and relationship between them and don't want it ruined. It's the first time they sat down and discussed boundaries and such openly as a group.

Darin Ehrhart

Ok, it was fun. It's your story and all so if this is what you want ok. The only, only issue I have with it is they are basically saying "Even though the majority of us were added to this Harem without you consulting the others, we think that kind of behavior is bad. Stop doing it."

Regis

Any chance he will use juggernaut drive, he should be able to use it now without using his life as a cost since he is a campione

The 3 B's

Hey look at it this way, it opens the door for further character development and makes him more human like than most mcs tend to be

Shizero Zeroshi

Luffy is here! Oh wait wrong series. 😆 Anyway. Mistakes are a corner stone for progress. Or something along those lines. It’s a good wake up call for him. 👍👍👍

Eineus .

All's well that ends well. It also gave you a chance to help develop Will more. And I am happy that they resolved their issues like normal functioning adults. (I can't stand drama honestly)

striker James

Great chapter loved how story progressed now I'm interested in what happens next

Grafian

Very nice conclusion to that whole thing :) Good sized chapter too!

Mioismoe

It's a good thing it happened, it was a opportunity for growth and for him to realize that he made said mistake.

CkLance

Excellent 💥


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