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Chapter 292 Part 3

🕑 Added 2022-12-29 11:24:58 +0000 UTC

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striker James

I love the chapters can't wait for the next I am curious what Venelana fells about temting whilem to the devil side

Oscar Sampedro Lopez

Jesus, the path to swoll. That has me laughing hard.

I_Don’t_Believe_It

You’re a an amazing writer and you’re story is perfect in my opinion (other than Venelana being in harem coz that made me loose some respect for Will coz hes willing to forget what the devils put him thru and she allowed her son to carry on doing, just coz she opened her legs and has big Tits) just take your time bro, just let us know if there won’t be uploads coz it’s super annoying to be waiting for a chapter that doesn’t come but keep up the good work

I_Don’t_Believe_It

I just realised that at some point Will is gonna have to go to Skyrim to Fight Malog Bal so help thorum get his girls soul back

AStoryForOne

Me too that’s why I’m going to edit and change it later.

MKJ

Little bit disappointed at the Zekram interaction. He *is* a devil that plays politics and has millennia of experience. Or maybe he’s being complacent? Other than that, very good.

Pierre laplant

Woo

Hadrian512

I enjoyed the chapter. Don't be overly critical with yourself.

KristofferXxXxX

I would love to see the God of the Bible residing in True Longinus to make an appearance during the Peace Conferance to give the Three Factions the lection they deserve :3

AStoryForOne

I think I was just tired and rushed it, i'll definitely be going back to fix some things.

Caliburn0

I'm a bit surprised Zekram was so... confrontational in his approach. He's a centurion+++ master politician and schemer. I can't see him approaching Wilhelm so directly without knowing prefectly well how he would react first. Approach him? Yes. Deride his lifechoices and lovers? No. Even if he did have such thoughts he should have kept them to himself. I'd much rather believe that he'd probe him subtly to get an idea of his psyche. First hand accounts are always best for that kind of thing after all. He'd continue to get to know him, maybe provide resources/advise that would be almost impossible to get elsewhere. Nothing too big, though. Best not to scare Wilhelm off. Then, after he knew MUCH more about Wilhem than he does now, and after he'd gotten everything he could from Venelana, THEN he'd approach him with the offer/demand/bribe to rejoin the devil faction in the way most likely to succeed. Zekram is supposed to be one of the best at what he does. What he did this chapter (and to a lesser extent what he did previously during the conference) just seems incompetent to me. It's something an arrogant noble used to throwing his weight around would try, not Zekram Bael, the guy that basically CREATED the political landscape of modern hell. He's much too good to screw the pooch like this.

Delltree100

Very nice chapter author sama

AStoryForOne

I'll look it over once I actually get some sleep. I do feel like I could have done better in some parts.

striker James

I feel the argument with bael felt underwhelming I mean with his knowledge he should of expected whilem not to be interested and relised whilem is invested in yokai not devil faction especially after years of being kept powerless because of devils

Cup of Happy

Is God going to make an appearance?

Starfall20

Can you awaken strata’s aura?

Eduard Sture

Good job , was very interesting to read

guise

very curious as to the next part can’t wait 😊

AStoryForOne

I'll do another look over when I'm fresh and with a clear head. See If i need to add some more stuff to help it out.

Just Some Guy With A Mustage

I did like the chapter but it felt kinda... empty? i guess? To be honest its hard to keepup the hype of the last few chapters

Monzter E

Damn it, its too short.... mesa need moar!!!! And good job this was very satisfying 😌


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