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Chapter 295

🕑 Added 2023-01-09 11:42:59 +0000 UTC

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(J)o(K)e laughers

Thx for the chapter.

Left_Nut_Of_Madara

A small omake would be just fine for the mines for me

Oscar Sampedro Lopez

Hahahaha. Good chapter that end have falling from the bed laughing.

Caliburn0

Being able to set time on pause is only marginally helpful in the case of character bloat. It's a meta problem. A problem with readers and the author. It's the problem of characters not getting the screen time they deserve.

Asharzal

I think the current harem with the future additions of Salem and Izanami are fine. Won't complain about Lilith though, would celebrate if she were to join as well. Gabriel is just... too innocent for my tastes? Jeanne D'Arc on the other hand would also be fine, Alter is after all one badass woman.

datguyFrost01

I really like the idea of Artoria getting Rhongomyniad and maturing in the future. Maybe if they pop in Camelot in FGO? Looking forward to the next chapter! You made my day. Have a good one!

Laplase

Gabriel joining the Harem sounds great, she seems like she'll get along with Jinn. However, Jinn might corrupt her though.

N

I think the harem is growing a bit too large honestly. It might be better to focus on the characters already part of the harem rather than add new people to it.

striker James

That's true in most storiesI Salem pyrra and kuroka need more devolpment and izzy needs to become official since at this point they relize there important to each other. But to be fair people forget when whilem leaves a world he can progress years and be back like tomorrow for them so yes he can get devolpment with those characters cause his harem dosnt lose time he just uses his power so he has more time 4 everyone

Iori Daemona Angel

Gabriel get!

Caliburn0

I think... And hear me out here... That we have enough people in the harem - no wait! Don't leave! I mean... There's this thing called character bloat. At some point the amount of characters in a story becomes infeasible for the author to write well. We need a certain amount of word count for good character portrayals, and at this point we already have a really large cast of secondary characters. Adding more can quickly become detrimental.

Jason Wu

Jinn: You know, technically, that sword is like my brother. Arcueid: Excalibur is sorta like my cousin

Shawn Muradzi

Oh yeah I know that, they was all hoes back then and she just got a bad reputation coz she slept with like all her students

Tristan R Mitchell

Scathach had no more "relations" than a male warrior of her time period.

striker James

This was a good chapter I can't wait to read what happens next tho adding Gabriel in my opinion seems more likely than Risa but I honestly wouldn't complain ether way if they became involved. But I am hoping Izzy gets more progress she fits him better than Salem. Plus I'm waiting for best saint Jeane return

Kloud Paradizo

Lol what did you expect from warriors lol

Shawn Muradzi

Oh Yh I’d forgot scathach was a little bit of a hoe back her days, and I like it the Gabriel idea, also kuroka should get a chance, just like pyrra


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