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Chapter 297

🕑 Added 2023-01-12 06:52:40 +0000 UTC

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striker James

The faunus could teach yokai arua and the yokai could protect them plus a world not dieing wile dangerous could make them hope for future

Wanous

Adam west and neherion (the other yokia leader) could get along like a house on fire

Wanous

I never thought of that but honestly it would be interesting if the faunus migrated to dxd and joined the yokia

Oscar Sampedro Lopez

Maybe an interlude of people from the menagerie, the white fang and Weiss's father reaction to the mine ride and the slaves appearing from thin air.

Malong

i would recomend adding the part of the dust mines as an extra for later

John Kilborn

Honestly a scene on the reactions of Menagerie to freed slaves appearing out of nowhere would be good. Without knowledge of magic that shit must come off like a miracle.

Fire_Fox2590

Really he should just offer to take her away from Remnant. Let her explore new worlds, do new things, meet new people. She is only pissed off and trying to kill everyone so she can get the attention of the gods right? So they will remove her immortality? Wilhelm could kill her if he needed to I am sure, but why doesn't she want to be immortal is a good question to ask now (That might have been answered in RWBY but I haven't watched since the fall of Beacon). And another question would be 'can Wilhelm remove the curse?'

striker James

Is it weird I want whilem to take the enslaved Faunus population and bring them home so they won't fear humans anymore

striker James

Thanks for the chapter.

James French

Thanks for the chap! Also there was a minor error in the beginning when talking to Junior- you replaced him talking with ‘Roman sighed’ or something along those lines

James French

Good bad though, I always welcome a dramatic plot device as long as it’s well though out & doesn’t necessarily screw everyone over in the end 👀

James French

This^

Mellomellen

Instead of the scene where he frees them maybe a scene where the freed slaves either confront him or help him later on

Naga

For me I don’t really mind about the scene missing, in the first place it’s not like there are any big highlights that the few words here didnt covered. He went alone, felt disgusted, met no one (that wasn’t a background character), freed the people, killed the slavers, got the dust.

Half Inward

I miss our girl Neo

Shizero Zeroshi

Yeah. Not to mention, with the other harem sisters. This is BAD.

Wanous

I liked the chapter. It flowed well and (to me) seemed to fit each characters personality

ieatstars

Salem is too unintentionally wholesome

Ironwolfej

...At this point, I'm kinda terrified of the potential fallout between him and Salem. Anyway, I like Regis and Izer5's suggestions. Maybe alternate between the viewpoints? Like, Weiss watching the news, what happened, and then Blake/White Fang response? Just an idea.


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