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Chapter 298

🕑 Added 2023-01-14 19:04:17 +0000 UTC

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Christian Perko

I am not too invested in the Salem romance but I'm glad things are progressing on the Remnant side of things. Remnant has always seemed a bit like the neglected Stepchild of this fic so far.

Asharzal

At this point he should just tell her about his true origins. Leading her around by the nose isn't going to achieve anything.

CkLance

Wholesome Salem giving me the sugar shakes! 😆

striker James

I don't know why but I could see them both flirt with each other and even hook up but them being like basically rosario vampire but true M rated were she drinks from him and fucks daily with his devil half being the only reason he dosnt turn

Strange Loop Sleuth

I think he's more likely to declare her a sister and bully her whenever she gets into too much of a goth mood

James French

I’m 10,000% about this

Chorky Dawalded

still waiting on wilhem meeting arucard Brunstead "aka the first grandchild of zelretch" will zelretch take issue with him flirting with her (not really sure shes his type sure shes old enough) will he flirt or be intimidated ?

Naga

That’s a really good idea

Caliburn0

Oh, and before I forget: It's been established that Zelretch has problems getting out of his native World-line, but you've also established the possibility of kaleidophones, so why not use one to circumvent the issue? A golem/doll which Zelretch can project his presence/consciousness through. If it's built with the same principles as the Kaleidophone then he should be able to remote control one from another world. It lets him be more of a character within the story while also not breaking the stakes due to his overpoweredness, since the golem would obviously be vastly underpowered compared with his real self. (It's capabilities would probably vary greatly dependant on the materials used in its construction.) It would also be a very nice gift from Wilhelm to Zelretch, and be a nice bonding moment. Also, we get to see Wilhem introducing people to Zelretch which would just be amazing to read about.

Oscar Sampedro Lopez

nice, I feel my sugar level raising from reading this

Caliburn0

I want to read about them talking magic again. Like a proper in-depth discussion about the topic. Where does Remnant's thaumaturgical system come from? The Brother gods? Somewhere else? It seems to specialize in elemental manipulation, or is that just Salem's speciality? She mentioned being able to read minds, and we've seen her manipulate gravity. What else can she do? Also, I think now's about a good time to reveal the existence of other worlds, really give Salem something to ruminate over until the next time he vists. I doubt she'll reveal it to anyone, but even if she does, who on Remnant could actually prove a challenge to him? Salem is the strongest person there. And really, if there's any world where knowledge of the Kaleidoscope wouldn't make a difference then it's Remnant. In all the other worlds that secret definitely has a purpose. It gives Wilhelm advantages he wouldn't otherwise have had, but on Remnant he doesn't exactly need any more advantages and so it's a bit moot, more a habit than anything.

striker James

Nice 😉

Aeden Emrys

Nice development between our Mc and Salem! But why did the chapter have to end there!? More please!

Sage Berthelsen

Nnnnooooooooo why you sssssttooopppp? Moareee!!

Scott H

I'm still looking forward to when Salem is told about his origins. I have a feeling that your version of Salem wouldn't really mind just tossing Remnant to the wayside to explore other worlds while learning all sorts of unique magic systems.

Adam Daw

What a great chapter!!


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