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Non-Canon Omake: The Little Spider, Part 1

🕑 Added 2024-10-14 04:20:09 +0000 UTC

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Selacha

I mean, it's been awhile since I read them, but didn't Annabeth straight up tell Percy that Athena just dropped her off in a basket on her dad's doorstep without a by-your-leave after being friends with Athena for a few months? He never really consented either, so I'm assuming this is her MO.

Einar Strandberg

Jesus Christ, just straight up raping Wilhelm. I always had the impression that the whole creating a child thing was more consensual for Athena in PJO, but this is interesting for this story so I can't complain.

Jesus

Demasiado genial

Danielle

This is really cute but also really highlights how the Greek deities are all terrible in PJO. Well, most places really

CkLance

That's kind of what it was though. A 'spiritual' rape. She took the literal essence of his existence, fused it with her own, and made a baby girl. All without his consent. However, no one compared it to a physical rape, but it was mentioned how Artoria and Alter were the only ones who could sympathize with how he may be feeling. Your conjecture is a long ways off from the tone presented.

Antares

Nah, I get the anger it’s justified. Just think that comparing it to actual rape is in bad taste and that thinking Athena is this super evil goddess that needs to be struck down is a bit much and that the name change is a bit cringe.

CkLance

You're saying Wilhelm and his harems reaction to a goddess birthing a child using his essence without consent, dropping the child on him, and noping tf out was an overreaction... The keywords are 'without consent' disregarding all the other technicalities you stated.

CkLance

This is both HEAVY and somehow wholesome for a non-canon omake 🥹

Torva_Messor0404

I said another comment further down it be really funny if Jinn decided of the pantheon a piece of her mind because you know Jinn. And it be funny as shit if Zeus acted like an asshole, and unlike the DXD Zeus, he finds out exactly how much you can piss off Norse😂

Michael Foat

No, no. Grover getting a quest from the Oracle leading him to Luke, Thalia, Bianca, Nico, and Percy all along the way through Yggdrasil just to track down Athena's Lost Child. Que a tired Satire, four children of the Big Three and an edgy kid of Hermes showing up on Wilhelm's door

Antares

Yeah, I initially missed the sealing his powers bit, still a bit odd that Athena was able to mix their essences together without her realising anything but w/e. Will was not raped, he wasn’t drugged or put in a divine hypnosis, he wasn’t forced to have sex with Athena, he wasn’t forcibly pinned to the floor, gaslit to think it was all his fault or that he deserved it or anything even remotely close. Comparing what Athena did to rape is not only disgusting but also stupid. Was it still an awful thing to do? Yes. Is his reaction understandable? Sure, he grew up with only his mother raising him, struggling to put food on the table and selling her body so he could live. He knows how hard it can be to be a single parent. Changing her name to Arachne is still an overreaction, it would be like if a woman was to have sex with Apollo, she gives birth and then after Apollo tells her the truth to her and proceeds to leave, she renames the child to Python. It’s a silly name and an overreaction and it comes across as if you’re using the child to be petty.

MKJ

Get Campione Athena to steal PJO Athena’s offerings and sacrifices.

Jonny Sanchez

Do another chapter of this plz 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

omar ayoubi

PLEZ also do the Honkai Star Rail Omake!

The alchemist Orlandez

I can see that It show in the books with their response to their kids they can be Sympathetic with their children but they don't seem to possess Empathy for their mortal children of any kind

Ofeq 2003

You forget about how her grandma/aunt/other mom Venelana is a renowned master of PoD and will probably teach her as well

Ofeq 2003

And not just any god killer... But one from fate where op bs is on another level

Ofeq 2003

William: that's my girl

Ofeq 2003

I think it's mostly a combination of the fact that they know their kids are mortal and so one day they will die, so getting attached is painful; a healthy amount of fear of Zeus and his paranoia that will undoubtedly make him think that if a god spent time with their kids it's for a coupe against him ; and lastly the fact all Greek gods either had a parentless childhood or childhood that lasted for a week top and then boom they are adults, so they don't understand the importance of parental attention

Ofeq 2003

Hell at least with Aphrodite you know you would get a nigh you would never forget... With Athena you could think of her as a platonic friend with zero attraction to, for the whole freaking time you know her, and then one day she will just show up by your door drop a kid and say see you never take care of my kid or I will smite you

Ofeq 2003

Well in their mindset they are all powerful Divine beings, and so mortals should feel honored to just be in their presence and let alone raise their children... Hell Athena's kids are supposed to be her "ultimate gift" to their "mortal father" as it's the embodiment of her "love" for them

Ofeq 2003

The fates: you literally pissed off the one person in existence who makes fucking Nyx, the strongest god of our entire fucking pantheon, look like a mortal! Forget about Kronos SHE will cock you long before your dad will get the chance

Ofeq 2003

First of all, ALL of his powers were sealed off. Second from their point of view a goddess, raped him, dumped him with a kid he didn't knew he had until that moment, and then disappeared with some bs about rules and what not as if it's normal to abandon your kid. And unless you skipped the whole chapter, they all right now in the "hate Athena" camp, and renaming Annabeth to the name of Athen's famed rival is a minor reaction in comparison to how they wanted to annihilated her before hand

Ofeq 2003

Well she made him from his "essence"... His essence in some part is devil, and it was sealed not taken away

Ofeq 2003

And then PJO Shiva (I refuse to believe he doesn't exist too) join in because who would say no to kick the Greeks in the nuts?

Ofeq 2003

Zeus is definitely on the list: he will either threaten to kill Arachne, or try to do something lecherous to her

Ofeq 2003

18 years later Percy is cocked...

Aaron Yates

You already have half devils. Just replace the human half with godhood. Plus Will already had divinity could have been a small chance for her to be born a goddess. It was only sealed away not gone.

Sage Berthelsen

I’ve had a few hours to think about it. I would laugh for hours if our guy got a different Athena to come with his harem to set a Base up in NYC. No confrontation just living life and it takes a few months for the Gods to notice every monster is New York is just gone. I can think of four or five wtf moments of love to see. Great work and hope your week gets better!

The alchemist Orlandez

People take what they heard in the Peter Johnson as fact when the movie change everything to the extreme that it barely have any connection to the books. The truth is they can see their kids, they just choose not to. Take Hades, for instance, he does. Or Posiedon with Tyson. They just see their children as heroes and don’t realize that they need parental figures in their life. That’s also why everyone at CHB gets along so well (for the most part). The Gods don't truly love their kids.

Jose Matos

Thank you for answering my comment. I love your story and hope to see a lot more of it. Maybe because I’m normal I can’t relate to Wilhelm having so much power.

AStoryForOne

Can you? When with a snap of your fingers, you could basically do anything you wanted, how was that 'normal'? By taking away the temptation and 'forcing' himself to be 'normal' for a little while, he got to remember what it was like. Likewise, as prideful as he was, he wouldn't accept anything other than doing it 'properly' as a normal person. There were many facets that led to him making the decision.

AStoryForOne

If you mean highschool, he was 18 in his last year due to when he was born and when school started. He left highschool before he graduated. If you're talking about the omake, he was in his last year around mid-point before graduating.

Jbubu

The minute he said " ... A Mist"

Jose Matos

I understand that was the reason why he did it. I just think it’s a stupid ass reason. You can study and have a perfectly normal life while being a god. See examples like Superman or other superhero fictional characters. And Wilhelm didn’t even have other responsibilities other than studying in this scenario.

Eduardo Martinez

He actually wanted to feel/live again as a normal person, if only for the duration of his education.

krn

I love the main story , but I live for these omakes

Torva_Messor0404

Whose probably been trained/blessed by actual, capital G gods

Nightmare1151 Almanza

Oh ok that's interesting

Torva_Messor0404

It all comes back to how Athena was born, I.E. Zeus had a migraine and somehow gave birth(FIIK, Greeks were weird)

Torva_Messor0404

I’d love for our resident god of magic to show up and give mean o’l Zeus a piece of her mind. Even funnier, would be if he upset Jinn and then had the equivalent of a whole pantheon ready to make the Greek pantheon really ancient history😂

Torva_Messor0404

You know you’re fucking up when Aphrodite is seen as a better parent then you

Sage Berthelsen

Drama, Gods and an angry harem? Oh my.

Emprisk

He cheesed his way into Harvard with memory manipulation, and Zelretch's Nepotism.

Silver W. King

Wait, what? I thought this was after he graduated.

Travis cox

Love it

loyd

I want to see the reaction of camp halfblood to a 1/4 devil 1/4 human and 1/2 goddess

Dancingrage

Athena is going to realize she goofed about the time she faces a number of very, very angry women who are about to deliver a JJK jumping on her. Then Arachne's father and extended family show up, from Uncles Odin (as in multiples) to a most aggrieved Red Emperor Dragon, and everything goes downhill from there.

Christopher Beckham

Holy crap I am hooked instantly

Dancingrage

Anyone familiar with the Greek Pantheon could have sniffed it out in time.

Jose Matos

It was unnecessary and stupid to seal his powers just to have a regular life studying in university, he could do it with his powers easily.

Dericof D

I'm starting to imagine all kinds of shenanigans that could happen in this omakes: Athena suddenly finds herself in a strange realm of floating islands and surrounded by very powerful women ready to have a stern heart to heart with her. Little Arachne meeting the other Athena from uncle Godou's realm. Arachne going to Camp Half-blood with one of her mother's lance and creating altars from her other divine aunties. Mr D having a mini hearth attack after finding an altar for a strange cloaked lady and being scolded for being rude to her little nice. Grover worshipping Mr. Wiggles.

Torva_Messor0404

Why do I have the feeling that Scathach is going to be increasing her god kill count

Chronicle Clock

Will it a time skip next and also I can’t wait for Will telling the elder Olympians that he defeated Kronos in his world on his own that’s gonna take a huge hit from pjo Zeus ego

thevolunteer

I’m both excited for this and sad. I’d have loved for Wilhelm to go to PJO in the main story, but if that wasn’t ever going to happen, then at least I got this.

Joe Bill

Really enjoyed this one! Can’t wait for the inevitable, You thought you were the only god here?!? I’m the motherfucking divine devil!!! Pulls out fully healed and realised god of the bible on one side and grows demonic horns on the other hand haha That’ll be some peak confusion! Like Greek gods exist, PSYCH! So do Romans, PSYCHE, so do Egyptians! P S Y C H E SO DOES CHRISTIANITY BAAABBYYY

Belly

Hmmm knew it was going to be a Athena when you mentioned school and his scholarly researcher persona. Alittle cliche using Athena but it makes sense. It would've been funny if the friends and acquaintances hebmade in college were also gods lol. And that she wasn't the only goddess there. (I can see a love/hate relationship with Artemis, and being bros with Heph and Apollo)

ThwartAbyss54

it was either gonna be percy or spiderman lol. interacting with peter parker and the mcu couldve been good too

Matthew Young

*walks up to Zeus with his aura in full force and pimp shaping him into unconsciousness* I would laugh so hard I cough up a kidney 🤣

Zerak

I think everyone familiar with PJO did.

Johny5

Well, of course it's Percu Jackson. Had that strange feeling. Well, at least he's well equipped to handle that world should Zeus try anything. He and Athena are going to have more than words, I imagine. At least, the women he loves can sympathize and they can prepare the kid. Though, how exactly did she inherit devilhood?

Nazarickk

Thanks for the chapter

Christopher

I smelled it. I knew immediately that Sophia was Athena.

Mustafa

Kids got a mother to take care of her. He could finish it pretty quick with the time differential even if he would have to be armed to the teeth the rest of the time.

Antares

It’s sad that this child was forced on Will but I do kinda feel bad for Athena too. She obviously enjoyed her time with him and wanted to give him proof of her love but she is forced to not see them or be a proper mother. It’s still kinda fucked but she is a multi millennia Olympian goddess so I’m not too shocked but I’m not one of those Athena must die people or that she’s a magical rapist or w/e. What I’m curious about how she managed to create a child with Will when he has his Campione Magic resistance. Did Athena not notice anything strange with him? EDIT: I do think Will comparing what happened to him to Artoria is in bad taste. Athena used her divinity to create a child out of both their essences. Artoria was raped by her own sister and was then killed by her son who was a product of incesteous rape. Whole different level. Also renaming the child Arachne is a bit much too, it feels like the childs name is being altered as a fuck you to Athena.

MKJ

PJO. Athena’s children are brain children. Thought up, not birthed. I assume that’s what you’re confused about.

Kloud Paradizo

TRUE!!! She will be the most badass character if not nerfed in other important area such as magic-control, etc.

Son-Of-Scorn

Hot damn this is good, kind a shame he left his education again but hey other priorities I guess, still a shame tho given the reasons he had for going

AStoryForOne

The immediate concern was the infant daughter of his that they were trying to help with.

cris pena

at that point its the fates telling you guys made mistakes. a mistake so bad we are afraid we are going to die if try to save you.

Kal

Wilhelm backhanding the PJ universe sounds grand

Chronicle Clock

Imagine the Olympians get a prophecy but it goes off saying your are fucked,cooked and fucked again

Colbie S Dial

Lmao I thought the same thing

Emprisk

Did no one care that Wilhelm didn't finish his education? Again.

Dalton Eades

COOK !!! BROTHER, COOK!!!

ranger2PO

This was really good, I like this non-o make. I want another one.

Zenith

I really Like This please make the next omake how the step right into Olympus and kick major divne ass pls i need more of this in my live

Nick Wen

Damn the arrogance of gods. Just straight up dumping a kid with their “partner” expecting them to take care of everything

The alchemist Orlandez

Yea this why I hate Athena in Percy Jackson because she is magic Bill Cosby. It not shocking her kids mortal parents don't like them. I mean at least Aphrodite get consent first.

Eduardo Martinez

As of right now, I don't care about the main story, Looking Glass or Kunou's Adventures, you NEED to continue this storyline.

AlphariusKerensky

ATHENA, YOUR DAUGHTER HAS RETURNED! I BRING THE DESTRUCTION OF YOUR LEGO SETS, NERD!

willowskeith

Scathach: "lets see if this Athena can run as fast as the other did from a fight."

Vortiboy27

Honestly with how rampant the gods in pjo fuck everything over and never suffer any consequences to their actions, having a god killer would make them humble up real quick

Joseph Fera

a demi-god of Athena with PoD? ...you gave the ultimate class of nerd the ability to destroy things on a conceptual level? and then...gave them Scathatch as a mother? ...are you planning to destroy the riordanverse in these omakes or is it just gonna be for shits and giggles?

MKJ

Really nice Omake. I’d like to see a part 2 where they return when Arachne is grown up or maybe break into Olympus and make their displeasure known. Either way, this was a nice read.

Sleepy Dragon

Oh I love her. I also hope Athena gets an angry Wilhelm & Co. to beat her up

john the gamer

This is good thanks for posting

Pierre laplant

More

MrMarauder

Man.. I'm actually excited to see if he humbles Athena. Take my money 💰

Crimnson Sage

lol I wanna see Zues try to flex on Arachne. I’m sure her campione father will take exception if he doesn’t kill Jim.

ExodiaTheForbiddenOne

Can’t wait for wilhelm and the harem to roll up to Olympus demanding child support

MelonOverlord

I crave more. I can’t wait to see another interaction with Athena after the fact.

Nightmare1151 Almanza

Wait how ????

Orchamus

Wow, very bittersweet, feel like a just had an 80%caocao bar shoved into my brain from the feels🥹

Daniel MacElfrish

I love it. Please continue

Vortiboy27

Pjo? Nice time to fuck over some really shitty versions of the Greek mythology with Wilhelm

blake anderson

Having an Arachne as a child of Athena is hilarious. I've been seeing a lot of interesting pjo fics so hooray for more.


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