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Chapter 418

🕑 Added 2023-11-15 06:26:01 +0000 UTC

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striker James

The great drinking competition bigins

Mellomellen

If I remember correctly there was a spin off of Will going to Hogwarts as a student is that something that you would consider continuing or will you be dropping that story

Hiram

Well I'm sorry you're in chapter 418 and just realized that you don't like a main theme of this amazing story.

Hiram

or humilliated enough to "cough blood"

thevolunteer

And some people aren’t going to. Personally, reading through a brainstorming session on how a “Hard Magic” character deals with a “Soft Magic” system like Harry Potter is boring.

Bio_Bill

'What's the worst that could Happen?', famous last words right there.

AStoryForOne

Eh, if it was a consistent thing, I usually do off screen. Like I don't write out every time he explains his world-traveling to people after the first few times or every now and then. It's not often that Wilhelm interacts with a 'new' magic system. This was basically him sitting down after he finished up everything he needed to do and wanted to waste an hour or two trying to figure out what was going on. It was pretty much do this or go home, and he was just going to relax for a little while longer. He was having trouble understanding how Magic in that world was working. He finally got around to why his spellcasting was failing and more or less fixed that point, but the 'how' still escapes him.

Trihexa71

That is true but it would have been nice if we could have skipped that part with a timeskip. That way we could have gotten some more interesting chapter development.

Arya13579

Seriously? This literally always happens when he goes to a new world, he tries to figure out how shit works there for at least a few chapters. Some of us actually like the exploration of different magic systems.

Arya13579

Okay, but that's totally in character for him. He's impulsive, that's been a defining character trait since like day one.

Peter K

It's a bit meandering and runs into power creep pretty fast, especially in the sequel. I think that's a big reason why the author never wrote more. I enjoyed it quite a lot, to be clear, but I wouldn't say it's up to the standards of this story. It feels like it was written by a particularly creative teenager, if that makes sense. (I don't mean that derogatorily.)

Osiris Sundavr

Fawkes was a she the entire time and has a human form. She just stayed a bird for the giggles while looking for a potential mate.

Osiris Sundavr

They can be omakes

Osiris Sundavr

This is going to end well, trust me I can tell. 😏

MerlinO

Jajaja, ahora Will tiene de colega a un Fénix alcohólico y la introspección al tema de la magia de HP fue bastante interesante, ya en el pasado me había hecho planteamientos similares sobre como comparar la magia de HP con otros sistemas de otras series y al final nunca pude dejar de considerar que era una mierda ya que aunque en la gran escala es relativamente débil sigue siendo una magia de potencia moderada alta y de muy "fácil" uso cuando te dedicas a estudiarla bien como hizo Voldemort

Oscar Sampedro Lopez

Hahaha guess grandpa didn't understand it either and wanted to share the misery and yes what is the worst that can happen?😏 thank for the chapter

Dancingrage

So, a hammered Devil and Phoenix show up to Hogwarts shortly afterwards, and Dumbledore winds up with more headaches than he ever wanted trying to answer the grandson of Zeltrech, and realizing why Grindlewald had such a horrible time of it with the elder Schweinorg.

Tyric Gaias

How?!

Tyric Gaias

Is the overall story good?

TheOchreKnight

Man that last segment with Fawkes? Chef's kiss

Trihexa71

It hate to say it but this chapter feels like filler. I get you want Wil to understand the rules behind the magic but you've made it look like Wil has OCD as he couldn't let it go to focus on more important things like exploring more.

shirousagi

This chapter and the last feels more like information dump, and please just give him a wand already it was fun the first time but it gets boring after a while...

Joaquin Cisterna

De acuerdo el desmadre que causarian esos dos seria legendario.

Ototsu_Yume

Fawkes is going to wind up setting Dumbles beard on fire at this rate. Going to be amusing if Wilhelm gets Phenex clan's benefits from befriending Fawkes.

James French

‘I’m not falling for that again’ WILL YOU ABSOLUTE BUFFOON YOU FELL FOR THE OLDEST TRICK IN THE BOOK 🤣🤣

TCGM

100 creds on the brat!

NeroSolas

I'll just ask this once, make a spin off adventures series for wilheim and fawks drunk off their asses like rick and morty.

Verdauga

I am delighted.

Nazarickk

Thanks for the chapter

ExodiaTheForbiddenOne

Loved it

Airas

Just wanna say that I'm really liking this HP arc. 👍

CkLance

Considering he is in constant contact with planetary, universal, and multiversal entities who in fact, cannot or for whatever reason haven't done the stated, his assumptions are fair.

Pure Dingo

Lol, I can't wait to see the fall-out of the drinking competition between them. Dumbledore's reaction will be funny as hell.

Mr Ritcher

I'm not sure I really buy his stance on "magic gods" as something he would actually believe. He literally is a multiversal traveler and has seen vastly different power scales. He should know that what meridia is to a dog some beings are the same to meridia. There are definitely beings out there that could very casually pull off a ritual like that. The idea he would set a hard limit on capabilities seems naive and not something he would have a preconceived notion of. I get the bit was more about how ridiculous the system works, but it's still a strange comment for him to make.

Siegrail

My money is on a flaming birb!

Suika Nine

Silly Will, one can't just explain soft magic system using hard magic system rules and expect to succeed. You're going about it the wrong way.

Galius

The best part of a firewhiskey drinking contest is that determining the winner is super easy. Just compare the size of the magical flames they spew afterwards. Probably makes for quite the rousing show. Also, poor Wil doesn't realize that birds can hold their liquor way better than humans. And poor Fawkes doesn't know that devils can probably do even better than that. That bird is gonna embarrass himself apparating while drunk. Gonna appear inside someone's robes or something.

matt smith

The answer is 'yes'

Hiram

I'm both concerned and intrigued at this idea

Zucchi_Sama

Do you plan to do anything with cursed energy from JJK?

Nur Selim

Just realises I typed the word actually way to much.

Nur Selim

Most ppl in the world actually have more than two names, it's actually really only Western culture that doesn't. It's mainly derived from your ancestors names and is actually why we still have our father's name as the middle name being very common.

Kappsa

Even here your first

Orchamus

Hilarious, 🤣 I love that it's HP that's driving him to drink🤣 Also place your bets folks, the fancy redhead foreign chap vs Falks the Phoenix!!

DareusX

I wonder how much of the 'Magical Racism Land' is going to end up dead when they inevitably try something on Kunou

Banat

The secon great fire of London coming up

matt smith

He thought the forbidden words... the harem shall grow... likely with said pheonix.

Peter K

A fun dive into Wizardcraft! Fate's Gamble by Lupine Horror went into Wizardcraft a little bit from a magus's perspective but I like this take better, I think.

Yeski

Best bird 😂

Jason Wu

Thanks


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