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Surviving in a world of Magic and Superheroes, Snippet Chapter 1

🕑 Added 2024-03-11 07:26:55 +0000 UTC

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Scott

Interesting idea for a story

Risketos15

I´m sorry but, VIVA ESPAÑAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!

Gorthalon .

10/10 would read

Israel Perez-Rolo

Okay, I am intrigued. This seems like a solid start and hook. I wonder what shenanigans he will be able to pull with a multidisciplinary background and one of the biggest available sticks from the FATE side. Poor Leviathan is going to experience a JJK-style jumping when it shows up.

Sage Berthelsen

This is such a wild idea! Two grim worlds making a new combo. Is it gonna be Dark or will light win the day? lol Dark obviously! It’s like a combination of a Dark Souls and Bloodborne. Sleep in DS wake up in BB. Let’s see these embers burn!

Lillow Lynx

This is very good.

Hellhound, Chaotic Magical Girl

MMM is great, but after using Lt’s for so long I almost always feel stifled when playing other CYOAs.

AStoryForOne

https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/astoryforones-snippets-and-story-ideas.26266/#post-8109740

Robert Williams

Would be very interested in seeing how far this can go.

Devan Duncan

I am definitely interested in a story like this if you decide to continue it!

DoctorWhoFan

This would be a great next story.

Ototsu_Yume

Can't say I'm really a fan of worm fusions since they tend to get overly convoluted, especially with the Nasuverse since that one is already pretty convoluted in a number of timelines, it certainly seems interesting enough though so good luck with it. Is there any chance of getting a link to your QQ thread?

J

Hope to see this again in the future, really like the concept. Also love Bazett has a minor role in this already. Really feel this has a future.

Snugglepuff

Definitely keeping an eye on this one

James French

Okay well that was a fuckin lie

James French

Best grim-derp I’ve read, the ff community for it goes hard as well

James French

I love Graev, but Lt’s is still the best in overall choice and customization available imo

James French

AYYYY HE USED Lt’s LET’S FUCKIN GOOOOO

ZloGlaZ

Looks pretty good 😊

thevolunteer

First thought by glancing at the title it was an omake of Wil in dc or marvel, and was really excited. Yet after reading, I’m not disappointed. Good first chapter

Peter K

Define good. Well-written? Absolutely. Pretty soul-crushing, though. Not exactly light reading.

carl hoffmen

This is really good

thevolunteer

Worm is perhaps the grim-darkest thing to ever grim-dark. It’s a well thought out premise/setting, and a logical look at what the world of superheroes would have to look like for the constant releasing of supervillains to make sense, but things hardly ever, if ever, get better.

StarSmith

Loved this

Thomas

At first I was disappointed not to have a chapter of will, but it's really good. It's a change from Will who's become too perfect/sure of himself, he's reached a level where his enemies are all powerful gods or weak transcendents. Adding Worm gives more lore and a metaphysical alternative. Even if the character remains a special "being", like will who has the ability to travel in the multiverse (omniverse?between universes, whatever it's called), this protagonist knows the "story", or at least the broad outlines, which is one of the best possible powers, especially in these two universes, where one false step and death is a deliverance.

Divine Poodle

Looks interesting!

Ivan Jerčinović

Yea, but he was invited, they intruded. I don't think gaia appreciates what they are doing. Honestly both gaia and alaiya should have grand servants and counter guardians at the ready against them. That is why thus fusion of worlds is weird to me

Asharzal

As he's in the hellhole that is Brockton Bay, one has to wonder who will be the first to try and attack/ coerce him

Iori Daemona Angel

This seems to be an interesting story

Noctis117

Isn't ORT only on earth to kill humanity in defense of the earth? Seems like the endbringers are doing its job for him.

Austin

A good idea for after your current story

Ivan Jerčinović

It occurs to me, where would be ORT in this world. Because of all the stuff the Endbringers wrought, ,ou would think it would have awakened.

AStoryForOne

I actually didn't fill out a CYOA, it's not an SI or anything like that and I felt like it wasn't really important to the story.

Bishop7053

I was half expecting a copy of graevs MMM cyoa to be included at the bottom, the general situation he is in matches a lot of the choices in that cyoa. Still nice, would definitely like to see more of this.

Jacob

Cool idea. Never read worm. Is it good?

AStoryForOne

It's not that absurd. The vast majority of his resources are mundane wealth and knowledge stored away.

VaultTec01

I’m here for it

matt smith

Hmm a decent start for the story.. though it feels a bit more of a power fantasy then even the current one due to how the character is starting with basically 'everything'. Not a bad thing but even with the worm cross over and the magi looking for you the conflict and risk would feel... minimal. Since it feels like he could basically 'magic sachel' anything he wanted. With wilheim we know a rough estimate of 'what he has/could have' and where it came from at any given time, with the new guy he could literally pull out random noble phantasms if he wanted and go 'ah yes now its time for the secret weapon my family hid for generations' before pulling out gilgamesh's key for the gates of babalon.

AStoryForOne

One of the quirks of Legal Emancipation in most parts of the US is the requirement that you continue to go to school and maintain a decent GPA. There's also the fact that he would want to keep up appearances and not get any extra attention on himself.

Grafian

Could be an interesting story for after Kaleidoscope. Don't much like the needing to go to school trope though

Orchamus

What a horrifying combination of worlds...but considering it's you doing it, I'm intrigued 😉. Also Lartoria...such a cultured choice.

fireball77

Ooh okay, np I just thought there was like a website or Google doc or something like with those other CYOA stuff

Son-Of-Scorn

I like it, don’t want Wilhelms story to end but this looks promising

Gintoki Sakata

This is going to be awesome. Shame it's going to be a while before we see more.

AStoryForOne

I didn't actually use one. Felt like it would be constraining to fill out a physical copy for people to look over when it's not a pivotal point atm.

UzuRyu

"Time to explain that this world is a mix between Worm and Fate. Because for some reason, I thought that would make an interesting combination when writing my CYOA." Strangely, I think that if he knew what was gonna happen, he would have changed the setting to something else. Like MGE, or MLP or anything less hazardous than two Death Worlds fused together really.

Echan Clinch Apa-ap

Noice! Good start!

fireball77

Interesting, can you link the CYOA u used though?

Peter K

Love to see new content, although I'm glad you're still focusing on Kaleidoscope. Question: has Frederick had/will he have a Trigger Event? I imagine this will be answered in the next couple chapters but it's the first thing that came to mind.

Diego

2nd

Falcore9080

Intriguing


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