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Chapter 458

🕑 Added 2024-03-24 21:38:25 +0000 UTC

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Jake122

just find the hulk he would take care of him lol

Belly

Annoyed how loki just keeps disappearing after getting his ass kicked. You'd think Will would've just decapitated hin after backstabbing Jhinn earlier

Matt

“I only have 407,000 remaining.” That line is gold

drey francisco

I think going in one piece and learning haki is hood

Lazy_Blackberry

Don't you just love it when Ddraig joins in on Dragon Shouts?

Matthew Young

Scratch that, the whole damn neiborhood is on fire!!!!! 🔥🔥🔥

Garrett Collins

since shes been spending so much time in tamriel, and shes messin with ether, when she hit him with limitation i heard the doom drum in the background lol thanks for the chunky one <3 also how fars that spear gonna fly XD

Ototsu_Yume

This is going to be hilarious if it causes everyone on the list to start talking like they are from a xianxia or xuanhuan novel.

Naga

Bruh I need to know what happens next gaaaaaah!!!!

Lord Mistfire

I really want to know what Jinn actually did to the sword with that Elder Scroll, it would be awesome if Wilhelm gets to add the sword to his collection…

Lord Mistfire

Did Surtr get a boost in strength because it was his fate to destroy Asgard just like how Odin got weakened because his fate was to be killed by Fenrir?

David Bray

my god this chapter was great, i loved it, I really hope rataskor was recording everything, I can just imagine the reactions of everyone, jinn was MVP here in my opinion

Cory Chen

Wow. Author, if you ever plan an original, let me know. I'll be there!

Verdauga

Glorious.

Sean Robbins

this fucking clifffffffffff!!!!!!!!!!

striker James

This was a great chapter and holy shit jinn went hard I hope she,s ok

Hiram

What an amazing chapter

PunchingTucan

God damn you cooked

Suika Nine

*Gun god nods in approval*

Einar Strandberg

Man, Jinn was awesome this chapter. So many crazy stunts. And the rest of the fight really reinforced how awesome it was for her to hold him off.

Matthew Ross

Wow... I wasn’t expecting this chapter to go so hard. And the ending??? Chef's kiss. Please don't leave me hanging too long tho

ZloGlaZ

Awesome!!!

Mellomellen

Will “I’m putting you all on notice! This chapter is complete!” Odin “damn it kid! That was the last wall standing around here! Now we can’t hide off screen!”

DatPerson

So good

Banat

I liked the chapter

CkLance

Stand Proud, You can Cook

Ravioli Stromboli

One of THE best chapters, wow. Jinns fight was the most hype in a while to me EASILY

matt smith

Jinn:"this is mine now" *while cuddleing her new toy of mass distruction*

Chronicle Clock

Won’t Apollo and Artemis hear the prayer hell even mini Achilles saw the shield of his namesake

Alec Loases

Holy shit what a great use of that list . Loki is now on notice XD

Robert Williams

Hate to disagree, but the jinn fight was my favorite portion of the chapter.

Snakeguy Dark

LETS FUKKIN GOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!

Nazarickk

Thanks for the chapter

Ben

Now this is epic

Echan Clinch Apa-ap

Cliffhanger you b!tch!!!!

Echan Clinch Apa-ap

Damnnnnnnnn

fireball77

After all this time I'm left wondering where Nyx is, how will she react to Kronos's death I wonder

Joaquin Cisterna

Me encanto no se como ba a terminar esto pero loki deve ser decapitado y desmenbrado por favor exelente capitulo.

Echan Clinch Apa-ap

HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!!

Miami

Goddamn what a fucking chapter! It was awesome! Jinns David vs Goliath type fight was awesome, Surtrs unexpected character outside of just 'Big bad guy destroy' was well done, his hero friends stepping up was a cool as heck moment even if Achilles lost his shield, I'm just happy he's alive. And that ending. That ending was amazing! Good fricken chapter author!

Based_Bass

This was fucking fantastic. Jinn is MVP. But still don’t forget that she literally copied a limited version of Kronos’ authority, and combined it with Ether. Bananaland 🍌🍌🍌

fireball77

Fuuuuuuuuck what a cliffhanger

emil emil

Jesus Christ, I lack the words necessary to describe how AMAZING this chapter was.

fitstickman

she was more or less, like a computerized program

Doliliisgamming

Jinn made a version of black barrel I would ask how but knowing who willhelm’s grand father is he would have notes on black barrel.

Just A Penguin

This was undeniably one of the best action chapters in fanfiction history. Jinn is goated. Surtr is awesome. I can't wait to see what Wilhelm will do next chapter.

fireball77

Are those spells Wil used from Fate? Or are they your own creations?

Orchamus

HOLY SHIT JINN!!! GO GO GO GO GO!!!

AR

Man, I felt chills reading that ending. Amazing work.

GodOfDestruction 2.4

Nooooooooooo, why the cliffhanger!!!! Such a good chapter

Grafian

Like a true and proper Devil, Wilhelm enforces bureaucracy and paperwork on an entire cosmology!

Selmephren

Nice

Laplase

He better be getting stronger after this all is over or during because he's honestly lost a lot from not being strong enough not to REALLY hit the Grind when this is all said and done. Losing Lifespan, Jinn Getting Hurt, Used some of his single use Trump Cards, Lending or Losing Treasures. I Hope what he gets makes up for it all and more and Yasaka helps with his Lifespan.

Israel Morales

So damn good

Robert Williams

Welp, I hate the cliffhanger. Please don't keep us waiting to long.

Icemoo

Huh, i don't know why but i hated the Jinn portion and can't really speak exactly to why. I loved every other POV shift thus far but i genuinely could not keep reading hers and had to skip to the end. Maybe it was just the fact that like 1/3 of all lines were just "X number of things came out" on repeat but it was horrible to read.

AStoryForOne

yup

Peter K

Holy shiiiiiiiiit

fitstickman

did she just create a bastardized Black Barrel? holy fuck

Darth Bayes

Awesome use of the Tablet. Though I'm not sure karma exists in Norse mythology and I could see having some issues with the foundation of the judgement. The Throne of Asgard will really help there, but he might need to find more reasons behind his authority than just that, e.g. Ygdrassil, Alfheim, etc. acknowledging him.

UnlimitedLikes

God damn nice checkovs gun with that list.

Dracola

Oh man I can’t wait for the next chapter and the reaction of the world for what will did

Seadrake

Jaw Dropping This was an epic chapter

Austin

Love the story

Ashura

god damn your cooking ao hard the whole kitchen is burning

Gabriel Rodrigues

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