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Interlude 37

🕑 Added 2024-05-05 15:01:35 +0000 UTC

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Skoll

Only issue was that it was ecchi, but not hentai. Iirc (stopped reading around vol 20), author never went all the way. Naked at most.

tobe

15 to 18s? it was a full blown eechi series lol. the target audience was supposed to be 18+ iirc, or was it 16+?

Dreamy_Crow

I bet Rizevim and Wilhelm’s dynamic will be like Shirou and Kirei’s

AStoryForOne

I've spent a lot of time building things up in the background over time. It's never been forgotten, but if you recall, I intentionally set a 6 month or so date in story.

omar ayoubi

Oh are you finally gonna get to the Fae, since we last saw them they literally attacked the youkai starting a war that was abruptly forgotten(maybe even the author forgot?)

Bishop7053

At least Valerie isn't being tortured and mindfucked to help them just blackmailed.

Iori Daemona Angel

Welp those idiots are going to regret it.

fireball77

Reads like they're just some guys doing some shit lmao

Raibeart TReiss

Willhem summons Meridia... It's super effective!!!!

Osiris Sundavr

@Echan: First time?

Belly

Nice chapter, although alittle bored with why this whole chapter was just the villians monologing when they aren't going to be relevant sooner or later. Also you'd think for gods(evil they may be) that destroying the world and perhaps dimensions is a dumb one by releasing the beast.

Osiris Sundavr

Or seduce her. Being sealed up for so long she is probably a little thirsty.

Osiris Sundavr

I second the Watermelon seducing Trihexa. Operation WaterMelon go!

tobe

Camelot is implied to still be a long way ahead of the story. Probably a couple hundreds of chaps.

KingD

Would be even funnier if the real reason Trihexia was sealed was because it was female and was super thirsty for GOD. If it turned out the beast was just a horny female and ends up falling for Wilhelm.

DerkKill

It would be nice if you could go back to Chaldea in the first part of the 6th (Camelot) and if it is possible to bring Artoria (Saber) with him and be able to fuse with the version Artoria (rhongomyniad goddess) and then have a lock and seal any entrance to the Faes kingdoms; and then when it's time to return to the second part of the 6th (Avalon le Fae) Whilhelm will meet several versions of Artoria + Arthur (Prototype)

tobe

nah, Rizveim is just a dick. He ain't anything like Kronos. Like Wilhelm, he does what he wants, just more "evil". His son is dead? he laughs and moves on. Kill his surbodinates for no reason? he'll probably be like "why not lol". He simply doesn't care, causing chaos cause he was bored. Wilhelm would probably despise him

Garrett Collins

and then trihexa calls her auntie XD

shirousagi

If Tezcatlipoca is appearing that means that there is a posibility of quetzatcoalt from fate appearing? And on a side note i can somehow picture how silly rizevim would look when he free the beast of apocalypse just to have it killed by meridia

savitar

Well, of course Rizevim is excited. Willhem basically does whatever he wants and that excites him. And of course the Greeks are a fucking pain. Someone should discipline them.

Renato Vera

Me lo estoy imaginando como lo que le hizo a goetia 🤣🤣

Suika Nine

Rizzevim: “He’s mine.” Watermelon: Sorry buddy, I don't swing that way. And even if I did, you aren't my type.

Emp3r0r

So when are u gonna power up our boi? He feels a lil weak for his upcoming challenges.

roland octavius

I can totally see Rizevim and Wilhem having the same antagonistic relationship Wilhelm and Kronos had just 10x funnier 😂

Einar Strandberg

I really enjoyed a peek behind the curtain, as well as their dynamics.

Nazarickk

Thanks for the interlude

Emprisk

To be fair the OG author wanted to make a hentai so the distributor/publisher is literally sitting on him to produce things to their standards. So making it a bit of a dumpster fire is his Malicious Compliance. IIRC CMIIW.

striker James

It seems chaos brigade chose death

striker James

Thank you for chapter

kronan_m

It would be a bit anticlimactic but at the same time really funny

ExodiaTheForbiddenOne

They spend all this time planning and scheming to release trihexia and wilhelm is just gonna call meridia so she can bitch slap it

Skoll

TBF, when the author wrote that, his target audience was teens, around 15 to 18ish. It's like if you were to go reread Rick Riordan's books as an adult. Some things that seemed cool or fine as a kid don't make sense anymore as we get older and gain more experience.

Verdauga

Interesting. And concerning. Competent and cooperative enemies are Dangerous.

Orchamus

Ah...fuck, the war with the Fae just got a mite tricky mayhaps😱

AStoryForOne

Yeah, they're certainly unhinged, and it bleeds through, I just felt like them being cartoonish about it was stupid. Though some of them do act cartoonish about it, some of them on purpose.

Skoll

Thanks. It's kind of interesting seeing the contrast from how unhinged the original author portrayed a lot of characters as, to how you handle their portrayals. Both the "good" and the "bad" guys, but more noticeable with the "bad" guys. Keep up the good work.

matt smith

"I am offended... wait he has izanami... I am nolonger offended" ah the death god mentality, all resurection is offensive unless them or another death god oks it lol. And yes pay no attention the the hades behind the curtain resurrecting yahweh to spite you.

Echan Clinch Apa-ap

LBB you beat jason wu!!! Congratz

Echan Clinch Apa-ap

Jason wu wtf your here!!!

Echan Clinch Apa-ap

Nice

Jason Wu

Thank you

LazyBlackberry

NEW CHAPTER!!! WOOOOOOO!!!


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