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Chapter 473

🕑 Added 2024-05-11 17:17:39 +0000 UTC

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Omega 69

Hmmm I have been reading your stuff for a while (and this is honestly one of my favorite stories) and I can understand WHY you had him do what he did cause plot has to plot but. He said that he was gonna take that thing to pandora AGES ago. Then said he was gonna go visit her right after dealing with the maiden and stuff. But then WHY the heck did he just NOT do what he said he was gonna do? It is like he has ADHD or something with how little he follows through with what he says he is gonna do. It sometimes reminds me of dragonball or Naruto with how much filler there is in this. I like fluff and stuff as much as anyone (especially Jeanna need more of that cutie.) but there comes a point where it feels like he is just procrastinating the important shit because he is lazy. Anyway enjoy your break friend of friends.

Charles Yonts

I want this omake so badly!!

Nick Wen

I think it’s usually well secured but as implied in the next chapter, there’s something powerful enough to draw the box outside the ring. Usually it wouldn’t do that but with the caliber of foes Wilhelm had to fight, something like this was gonna happen sooner or later

ZeroSkillz

How does he expect the ring to be secure, if things keep hopping out without his notice? He should set up a sealing designation for dangerous objects in there.

Jaz

Yes, I agree. Get the Egyptian card cards.

Pure Dingo

In a way, it shows he has become too cocky and arrogant believing that he can handle anything thrown his way.

Gabriel Rodrigues

Orihime Inoue*

shirousagi

Ditto, its the first thing he should have done after both nix and hades says it was a bad thing

Johny5

Why would Wilhem ask Orochimaru of all people and how would he have the knowledge to even do so?

Zachary Fiscus

Now I doubt it will happen but if she falls could orohima help return Gabriel to normal.

tobe

go discord. asfo actually already had an idea what his final ancension would be

NewSaint

How do you think Will would react to ending up in the Naruto world?

Creepy Wanderer

I just hope the MC becames something fully. He’s part devil, human, demi-god, spiritual entity/shinigami? If he fused all this quality’s in something new, it would be really cool. Like a Daemon God or something closer to Nuwa.

Alex Wierzbicki

Nah I prefer the mirror omakes honestly should find a way to make them canon

Pure Dingo

I hate to say it, that thing should have been taken to Pandora as soon as he got it.

Suika Nine

Nitocris is a female pharaoh, so Will challenging her to a duel would be funny as she would have no idea about duel monsters despite the fact the game originated from Egypt

Osiris Sundavr

Calling it now: Canon!

Osiris Sundavr

Starting to look like Gabby would be getting those Authorities

Osiris Sundavr

Meridia would be his best Ace Monster card. Obelisk would have nothing on her.

Osiris Sundavr

Seconded. 🙏

Osiris Sundavr

I like this. I have absolutely no clue who this Nitocris person is but it sounds great. 👍

Xora

Hell yes yugioh baby

Osiris Sundavr

Fuck the hell YES!

Osiris Sundavr

IT’S TIME TO D-D-D-DUEL!! Also: Not-Gabriel’s wings are changing (The Blackening)tm. Wilhelm: Fuck! Father Swole: Language! Even though I fully agree, there are still children here!

WhyNot,NotWhy

Let’s Duel

Sleepy Dragon

Great Chapter! And I think the Yu-Gi-Oh idea is great! Wilhelm deserves some dad friends

Peter K

OH NOOOOOOOOO

DerkKill

I hope you can take advantage of this opportunity to make Gabby fall in love with her and free herself from these fascist restrictions of her faction.

DerkKill

I think I know what this link could be if you think carefully about why they parked there and the Old Testament Bible itself refers to the beast of the apocalypse; Also, if no-gabby had not appeared, none of that would happen, but in the end, as they say, curiosity and inpassion can lead to unexpected events.

Orchamus

...huh, that went better than I thought it wou- yeah nevermind, poor Gabby, save her Wilhelm, add the angel to the harem!!! Also damn right we want Yu-Gi-Oh Omakes😆

willowskeith

Hmm not exactly an 'unpopular opinion' its just several plot lines comeing to ahead at once it seems, honestly, it shows that the worlds dont all revolve around wilheim even if his timing isnt the best. The hades and rhea bit. Plus the start of the amber bit could be counted as 'down time' if you look at it that way.

Nazarickk

Thanks for the chapter

That Warden

I mean Wilhelm being friends with kaiba would be hilarious since that man literally hacked his way into heaven just to duel gods lol

Raibeart TReiss

Willhem: I use my Odin to ritual summon My Migthy Lord of Yggdrasil - Sir Wiggles the God King of the Aesir!!!

MrWottle

This is probably an unpopular opinion, but could you chill with the dramatic escalations everywhere Wil goes? Going from Ragnarök, to the meeting with Hades and Rhea, then the Salem visit which lead to Wil having to deal with Amber's missing soul bits which necessitated going to Bleach and getting caught in shit over there just to get Tessai to start healing Amber, and then taking Jeanne to see the Vatican ending in Pandora's Box resonating with something under the Vatican that has Gabriel in danger of falling, with all of the shit happening in the span of 3-ish days, I believe. I'm not asking for much here just a chance to fucking breathe.

shirousagi

How dare you not present the king sir wiggles with all his titles!!!.... on another note im sure the vatican would somehow blame wilhelm, unless he take gabby to mommy pandora to see if she can cure her? Making it so she doesnt fall?

Parukia de Bolivar

If you do the YGO thing, have him play Branded. Maybe a watered down version. Or maybe Chaos Dragons would be more appropriate?

ASleepySloth

Yeah, this is 100% on Wilhelm here. He already has experience with sentient items leaving his storage on their own, and knew the box was all types of bad news but just put it off and ignored it.

Ashura

Omakes are always nice. Especially with this story.

MacDoc-101

So what would happen if Willhelm goes 50:50 Divine power: Holy power would he become top tier angel or semi-God?

Mathieu Toulet

Ok, my honest réaction is wtf.

UnlimitedLikes

I love yugioh and your omakes are always amazing

Southmonk

Lesson learnt? When you have something malevolent you immediately handle it.

ItsDragonking

sure yu gi oh

Mads

would love it

striker James

Good chapter

araknor217

Nice Cliff.. i mean chapter! Thank you for the hang :D

fireball77

Huh, this is interesting

Suika Nine

Personally, I would rather you do one more the looking glass chapter so that we can see the other reality's reaction to Sirzech's negligence. THEN we can do the yugioh omake. And finally, the continuation of that omake can be at Chaldea when Willhelm gets into an argument with Nitocris and somehow, it devolves into a duel monsters duel.

krn

Pls have gabby in harem

Lazy Ghost

Isn’t the only thing left in the box Hope? I’m not sure about this version though. I imagine the Church has something relating to the Evils of the World in their basement. Which fits I guess.

Julian Pair

A Yugioh omake series would be amazing

Big Brizzz

Yes Yu-Gi-Oh

Ofeq 2003

Gabriel gonna fall/turn into a devil and later join the harem?

TheSonicTurtle

Oof probably gonna need to use the spear to smooth that one over

Sean Robbins

lol what would his deck be?!

Savagesmiley

great idea for an make

Laplase

I mean he did kill some gods recently and he is in the Middle of the Big G's place of power while he's deceased, maybe it's trying to complete the Campione ritual and give him some new Authorities?

Regis

Yes!!! Mc and Kaibab need to be friends

savitar

The chapter was very good. I think Pandora's box is going to be a big pain Hey, make that Omake series. Young love between Kunou and Mokuba (aka endless chaos hahahaha)

thevolunteer

I really could not care less about yugioh and would rather you update pokemon, TtLG, or your new story if you are going to do a something else

Pierre laplant

Sounds like a witch. Bet he floats

Chancelor Delamare

I'd appreciate a yugioh side story. I could see Wilhelm running either the Darklords (fallen angels) or Dragonlords/Armed Dragons(Ddraigs Rep). plus some meme cards.

willowskeith

I think willheim may need to poke 'gabby' with her daddy's long hard spear.

Sean Gallacher

What deck would Wilhelm run? Dark World? Chaos?

Ben

Epic chapter

AStoryForOne

Kunou at Hogwarts will be a canon side story that runs parallel to the main story.

Mexikanische Kroaten

Honestly not a big fan of Yu-Gi-Oh would be interested in kuno in Hogwarts

Grafian

Also, this is a great time to temporarily hand Gabriel the True Longinus and prevent her from falling

loyd

That sounds great

KingOfR3aper

Why am i get god of war vibe with pandora box

AStoryForOne

Hmm, I'll give it another look over after sleeping. Might just be because I'm tired.

JRFG

Yes, Meridia is more powerful than Ophis in her kingdom. So she could defeat the beast of the end?

ExodiaTheForbiddenOne

I summon brick of justice in attack mode *throws a brick at Kaiba*

Dalton Eades

Do it

Grafian

Not gonna lie, the ending felt kind of rushed :p The entire rest of the chapter was great though!

Snakeguy Dark

I haven’t really kept up with Yu-Gi-Oh! since I was a teen, so I’m not sure which cards would suit him dragon or fiend deck? Or you could have him completely troll other people with a Kuriboh deck

andrew rousseau

And wilhelm rescues gabby, the start a new crush

roland octavius

I would totally read an omake about just him pulling out complete bullshit cards and winning would be hilarious 😂

Jason Wu

Thanks


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