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Chapter 539

🕑 Added 2025-02-13 04:27:24 +0000 UTC

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Nedrexo

This kind of interactions for me is what brings the stories to life, much better to have them describe to me what happens in what seems like a speed run to advance the plot.

Nedrexo

What a... "shitty" fight :D got it? Cuz... okey I shut up

Thomas!

Moarrr

HiddenMaster

That might legitimately be more effective than most attacks by this point. The MC is hardly invulnerable, but you generally need to reach a threshold to do anything significant by this point and that is usually detectable. That and guns won't do much. I could see the MC not responding only to go "Motherfucker!" as the holy water gets in his eyes and while he doesn't get third degree burns like a typical devil would, it is still enough to stun him.

Belly

I feel like the reason why this specific arc is long is so Wil just turns Thor into a handyman on earth who basically is Jane's bum on and off boyfriend. Like he ends up wasting so much time down in modgard that he ends up enjoying his mundane adventures with Jane so he ends up staying lol....

Talsen

Thanks for the chapter. It does need a bit of a grammar/spelling pass though, there are a few typos throughout.

Lazy Ghost

Uncle Sam’s POV would be fun

Osiris Sundavr

When Fury hits the Jeanne button I hope he actually gets consequences for attempting to do whatever he tries to do. Been awhile since Watermelon has kicked someone’s butt out of anger.

Richard Paull

SHIELD totally has listening devices in the build and therefore some of the agents are armed with super soakers.

James French

Oh hoh hoh boyyyyy next chap is gonna be a dizzy

Codeninja676 (Brian)

Oh Shield is getting their shit pushed in harder that when Hydra went public on em.

Sonata Fauns

Y’all think Wil would go up to agent Coal and say “Sir these people who I have never seen before are trespassing arrest them.” With a straight face until Jeanne pulls his ear?

BradlySteak

Yes! I would love to see a Fury POV.

omar ayoubi

UwU I like the Thor bromance have him be part of the gang as well when he goes to other worlds!

Omega 69

Yeaaaaaaaah Shield is gonna have a baaaaaaad time….

Christopher Jimenez

He undid it right after the fight before helping him finish the work.

Gabriel Rodrigues

Finally!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ohhhhhhh Myy Gaaawdddd

Ironwolfej

Yeah, I can't see Fury not pushing the "Jeanne" button. He might not even mean to, but he has a bad habit of trying to play the bad cop when he thinks he can get away with it. And so far, Will really hasn't flexed in a way that SHIELD is aware of, as I recall.

Xora

fuck wakanda

zane

Will going to hazbin hotel would be fucking hilarious, it’s soli as an omake, but not so much for the mainline story,

Kz3838

Thank you for the great chapter, love Coulson being smug at the end there. Also Wilhelm getting to Thor's level and helping him out was great, really like how you wrote it. Stay safe out there and keep up the good work!

Nazarickk

Thanks for the chapter

Mellomellen

Thanks for the chapter!

Dracola

Did he nerf himself for this moment or is it going to be a nerf until the end of Thor arc?

emil emil

Loki gonna throw a hissy fit, and big sister Jeane will probably have to break off the sibling fight between Thor and Loki, probably give a healthy amount of scolding too.

willowskeith

A battle for the fate of humanity of gods v humans does not sound like something zelretch would find interesting? Are we talking about the same dude?... or heaven having annual purges of hell not interesting enough? Thats discounting the potiential effect it could have with the spear, possibly speeding up its healing or growing its power. (Since both would be in the 'Age of Gods' and gods have been shown to be able to... 'resonate', is the closest thing to put words to it, with their counterparts.)

Son-Of-Scorn

It's really nice to see Thor and Will bonding, it's funny to see Thor getting pranked but it's not something that I want to keep reading over and over, also can't wait to see how all the develops next chapter especially with Jeanne coming back.

Nick Wen

At the same time I dont think Zeltrech is eager to send him to another world where gods have a massive presence. I dont think theres anything interesting there he wants Willhelm to look into anyways.

Cody

I wanna see stark and will interact. I'm sure it'll be hilarious

Orchamus

Honestly I'm waiting for someone to threaten Jeanne, perhaps Fury, and Wil to absolutely lose his cool. Been a while so I've he got MAD at someone.

Ricardo Torres II

Second

Odinori

I’m happy Jeane is back. Also coulson being smug is amazing. Wakandians are having to cope and seethe which is hilarious and deserved. I don’t know whose pov I want to see more. Stay on Wilhelm, switch to fury, switch to the wakandians, or Jeanne’s pov. They would all be amazing to read.

willowskeith

It would be interesting if wilheim went to some other universes like hazbin hotel, or record of ragnarok to interact with the christian pantheon there... if only to mess with them.

M360

Yo been a while since i posted but first


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