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A Tale from Fictricia: Cynthia Biggest's Quest (Part1/???)

🕑 Added 2023-07-07 15:28:42 +0000 UTC

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Poggie

found the story hard to follow. not sure whats going on and only in chapter 1

Moonlyte

Me too, Jam. But she will come. 😘

jam

😢😢 I miss Rika 😭😭

Moonlyte

I’ll at least try to get FS out once a month dont worry. 😘

Moonlyte

Thanks for the feedback and giving it a try. It’s a theme that’s not for everyone i think. This one won’t be long maybe like 4-5 parts

Moonlyte

Thanks! This is supposed to be like 3-4 pages at first, but somehow it grew…. haha. If I have more time maybe I’ll add in a cutscene between these still frame in the future works. (Something like visual novel)

jam

I'm glad Moonlly that you can do what you really like, we should all try it, it's the healthiest, I wish you the best!!!🥰🥰 I hope you don't interrupt Forever Summer or put it on hold for too long 😬😬, especially now that it was getting really interesting😈😈 😘😘

Richard L Oswalt

I'll be honest. I only skimmed this one (got a lot on my mind as of late). From what I got from it, It's not my thing but it does look good and I can see it being a hit with others (again not my thing). The righting is nicely paced and the characters are described well (no overly explaining), I also like the idea of Light Hunters/Hunting. I will not flat out ignore this but I can't see my self getting to invested (again, not my thing).

RikiS

Cant wait for more diverse pictures with characters, not just in a still frame. The faces are pretty well drawn for the emotions (especially the evil grin on page 15)

Phil G1

No problem.

Moonlyte

Thanks for your honest opinion, Phil. But that's unfortunate, this is really my favourite theme, haha. So I think it'll be a good time to take a break from Feminization just a bit.

Phil G1

Personally, this is not my thing but that's just my opinion.

Hilde

Or I mixed them around again. Not the most trustworthy source when it comes to left vs right. But I think I'm right

Hilde

It looks good! Exited to see where this is going. One thing though. The reading direction text says to begin top right. But the (1) is top left

Moonlyte

Hmm, I'll try, but I think the font size is pretty large. (but I read everything on my 10" ipad, haha.) Or maybe this format is not suitable for phone. Next I might try to make it 16:9, which is the width of FS image. Maybe that could work.