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Chapter 593

🕑 Added 2025-12-06 01:05:10 +0000 UTC

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Dericof D

Are you planning to include the Rating games as an interlude?

Taxel

Kaleidoscope is so op that it requires the mc to be really dumb or the author talented enough to supress suspension of disbelief to not make it a really short story with all conflicts resolved pretty fast. Its a problem with all world walking powers where you can nab power ups from different worlds. What does skill matter if you can destroy entire universes with a punch not just mountains like in Wilhelms monologue.

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Every time he's getting ready to introduce Sir Wiggles, I just picture Wilhelm pausing to take a super deep breath before listing off all his titles lol Also Lady Wiggles needs a title

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I'm curious when we're gonna see what's going on with Thorum and Serana's mother Valerica? It was clear that she's interested in Thorum, arranging moments where he walks in on her changing and such ;) In the interest of bro-ship Wilhelm must help Operation Oyakodon for Thorum

:Dan the archer

Can't wait for the next part

TurnkeyFish

Thanks for the chapter but please we need another Kunou's Hogwarts Adventures. Please

D

You know this story is good when I automatically hit like before even reading the chapter, because every chapter has been great :) Proud of Wilhelm's growth here and am looking forward to his meeting in the next chapter. Also Koneko is hilarious "pew pew." 😂 Do not mess with the 50BMG carrying Kuudere Catgirl

Surge1301

Better not loose or forget about Avalon. Would be silly since Wilhelm has used it to save people he cares about often so he’d never take it for granted.

Nazarickk

Thanks for the chapter

Taylor Valentyne

very, very proud of Wilhelms character growth. And I’m also glad to see sairaorg get his mom back, a wonderful chapter.

Boring Teenager

Prototypes tend to be much better in the nasuverse with Arthur and Artoria, Prototype Excalibur and Excalibur, this also seems to apply to the world of DxD, we know this because Runeas and Rias exist.

Green223

So Rias clone is showing up

Orchamus

That'd be fairly amusing

Orchamus

Good training session, hopefully it plus the potions( and BFG)help. Also stoked Misla is awake, such a good mom. Also very eager to see him meet Runeas, they should get along like a house on fire

StormGamer

Yay I hope we get to add better Rias to the harem (as in red haired)

savitar

To be king, you have to be cruel. A kind king won't protect his loved ones because he'll be too busy fighting for his life. If Rias truly wants to be more than just another demon, she has to be ruthless. When it comes to fighting, she must make decisions that guarantee her enemy's defeat. In the novels, Rias was always portrayed as too kind, meaning she wasn't a demon at all. I'm glad to see Sai's mother healed; I wonder what exactly the curse is. Every author has their own twist on it. I look forward to seeing yours.

Zarimous

Was rereading the story and I had a thought about supernatural online message boards, and about xXVoid_SamuraiXx in particular, what if the person behind the account is Big Red aka Dragon of Dreams and they are telling the truth about everything but in the most unbelievable shit post way? I'd like to see an omake or an interlude from his pov , just him trolling people.

Nate

I am like number 100. That makes me special. My name is Ed.

thevolunteer

Aguamenti* Great chapter. Wilhelm being this kind to Rias and Co. is such great great development for him. He’s grown up so much. Your Rias is almost startlingly human, perhaps more so than in canon, but this was a good lesson for her to learn.

Bishop7053

Sai, do not resist. Accept your future step daddy and step momma. Misla is gonna want to thank em both and want to be the meet in an Artoria and Wil sandwich

Jesse

I like the other version of when a man and a woman love each other very much it’s when a man and a woman drink far too much alcohol

Raibeart TReiss

Runeas will meet a Sir Wiggles? We need more titles v:

Tristan R Mitchell

Runeas is Mesugaki. Take that as you will.

Kris

I feel that power argument with Sai was aimed at a few specific people who whine why Wilhelm isn't already strong enough to walk over anyone

Tristan R Mitchell

Brat Correction. Mesugaki Grandma.

Tristan R Mitchell

Rias: AAAAHHH! (Rias is scared of Camels after a bad experience at her family Camel Stables when she was six)

Kz3838

Thank you for the great chapter, I look forward to the meeting with Runeas. Stay safe out there and keep up the good work!

Heraclitus

Camel for the Camel God! Camel for the Camel Throne!

Rake1810

That traumatizing is exactly what they need. They have the power to take Riser if they just didn't....suck. Yay Misla!

Gawain

He needs to take Runeas to pound town

Johny5

[If it wasn’t obvious, it’s Runeas. ] It was pretty obvious actually. QUestion is: will they get along well or will Runeas get on Will's nerves? Aside from that, I'm suprised we're still delaing with Rias's marriage issue. After everything that happened so far, it is still jarring to find out. TFTC!

Ivan Jerčinović

Thanks


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