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🕑 Added 2024-04-10 03:44:32 +0000 UTCHey everyone, just a heads up that I might not be able to post updates for "Game Tycoon" and "Tycoon Actor" today. I'm planning to focus on writing chapters for the novel "Godfather System." If you've taken a peek beyond the prologue, you'll notice that each chapter runs between 1,600 to 1,800 words. If you're curious, feel free to check it out, though you might prefer to wait until there are more chapters available.
The reason I'm diving deep into writing chapters for "Godfather System" is that I've been hit with a strong desire to write it. I find myself working on this fanfic novel from as early as 1 pm all the way to 1 am. It might sound a bit extreme, but I genuinely enjoy it that much. I hope you guys can be a bit flexible with me today.
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J A.D
Maybe it could be because of an old injury. I'm just saying it'd be some interesting character development, especially with like former military buddies or with maybe him being frail and worn because he was drinking himself to death due to his psychosomatic injury. Like a leg wound or something. Shrapnel or a bullet. Nothing major just enough to say that his time at war is over. Otherwise he'd be considered a coward in that day and age. I know some guys from back then, and they are pretty clear on what it was like for an American man who didn't volunteer after Pearl Harbor or who wasn't drafted. I'm not trying to hijack your story, I just think it'd be some more spice and interactions with characters from Lorenzo's past. Also some inside info on getting military surplus weapons after the war.
Illuminati
He's still 16, so by the time he turned to the age 18, the war is already nearing it's end.
Gold Demon
Are you going to let mc join the war?
Illuminati
He isn't. He is thin, that's why he is taunt of being soft by Max.
J A.D
Well, I'm enjoying the Godfather system. Though, gotta say it's weird for him to be a healthy man in 1943 who isn't in the military. Maybe add a injury that left him discharged honorably to bond with Vito over?
Gold Demon
Cool
