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🕑 Added 2024-04-14 15:50:56 +0000 UTC

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TeoPJ

I don’t mind a re-write

Strange Loop Sleuth

Treat it as a learning experience and keep it going. Maybe write a few chapters of "side story" to develop other characters. Like Mira had all the marking of an interesting character but she has been pretty much ignored after they got married. Your concerns are valid, but I cant see a rewrite as helping at this stage.

Sleepymoonfox

You could add a small system too it, like ‘by doing this you acquire this technology from cyberpunk’

Banana19

Nice display pic!

tf2spydumbone

You can do whatever but please keep original one...

Tiago Mieres

I hope you can finish it... it would be a shame to abandon it after so much

AvidRead3rAd1ttc

Just slow down and pace yourself. Rewriting it may lead to you just abandoning it altogether.

Maggie329

Game Tycoon is such a big book. Wouldn't rewriting be more exhausting than continuing the current book? Maybe for the next couple of chapters focus more on interpersonal relationships of the protagonist. Still if you want to rewrite completely your choice. But if possible please don't delete the original in case you choose to rewrite it.

Banana19

Well I’m up for rewriting that book. He grew too big too fast. But that is a 500 chapter book. A lot is covered in those 500 chapters. To rewrite it is a daunting task which can make you burnout real fast. You are also writing 2 other books simultaneously.

Luke

Nah just finish it and focus on your other stories

reece campbell

Keep writing as is. Maybe just cut down on the focus on events from the past if they are draining?


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