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Love Interest End Story: Montan - Part I

🕑 Added 2023-06-14 05:00:04 +0000 UTC

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I didn’t expect to like Montan when we met him in the main story, and yet here I am. He’s a Good Bro.

dat guy

Also "what books he poured over."

dat guy

Word choices? * I think the 'know' should be 'no' in "There were know cracks or lines" * I think the 'sign' should be 'sigh' in "his disappointed sign" . The image created is interesting though :)

It will never cease to delight me how easily the Gueveras attract and surpass “rivals” while being completely oblivious to same. Seeing it from the rivals point of view is just all the more entertaining.

Elephant No. 5

Professor Hailan seemed to pour over the first icon - pour, pore?

Cymi

I can't decide Gengen is going to end up with Montan or Axton lol! bur I really like her :)

Shannon Livingston

I honestly forgot that Montan was a love interest before this came out... He had such a hard time during the second half of the story; I'm glad he's doing well now.


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